American essays; Literature -- History and criticism
Amiel says of Renan that science was his material rather than his
object; his object was style. Yet Renan was not a stylist in the sense
in which I am using the word. His main effort was never a verbal
one, never an effort to find meaning for words; he was intent upon
his subject; his style was vital in his thought, and never took on
airs on its own account. You cannot in him separate the artist from
the thinker, nor give either the precedence. All writers with whom
literature is an art aim at style in the sense that they aim to present
their subject in the most effective form,--with clearness, freshness,
force. They become stylists when their thoughts wait upon their words,
or when their thoughts are word-begotten. Such writers as Gibbon, De
Quincey, Macaulay, have studied and elaborate styles, but in each the
matter is paramount and the mind finds something solid to rest upon.
“The chief of the incommodities imposed upon the writer,” says
Professor Raleigh, is “the necessity at all times and at all costs
to mean something,” or to find meaning for words. This no doubt is a
hard task. The trouble begins when one has the words first. To invoke
ideas with words is a much more difficult experience than the reverse
process. But probably all true writers have something to say before
they have the desire to say it, and in proportion as the thought is
vital and real is its expression easy.
When I meet the stylist, with his straining for verbal effects, I love
to recall this passage from Whitman. “The great poet,” he says, “swears
to his art, I will not be meddlesome. I will not have in my writing any
elegance or effect or originality to hang in the way between me and
the rest, like curtains. I will have nothing hang in the way, not the
richest curtains. What I tell I tell for precisely what it is. Let who
may, exalt or startle or fascinate or soothe; I will have purpose, as
health or heat or snow has, and be as regardless of observation. What I
experience or portray shall go from my composition without a shred of
my composition. You shall stand by my side and look in the mirror with
me.”
This is the same as saying that the great success in writing is to
get language out of the way and to put your mind directly to the
reader’s, so that there be no veil of words between you. If the reader
is preoccupied with your words, if they court his attention or cloud
his vision, to that extent is the communication imperfect. In some
of Swinburne’s poems there is often such a din and echo of rhyme and
alliteration that it is almost impossible to hear what the man is
really saying.
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