American essays; Literature -- History and criticism
A writer with a pronounced, individualistic style--one full of mere
mechanical difficulties, like Browning’s or Carlyle’s--runs great risk
of wearying the reader and of being left behind. So far as his style
degenerates into mannerism, so far is he handicapped in the race.
Smoothness is not beauty, neither is roughness power; yet without a
certain harmony and continuity there is neither beauty nor power.
Herbert Spencer, in his essay on the Philosophy of Style, would have a
writer avoid this danger of wearying his reader, by writing alternately
in different styles. “To have a specific style,” he says, “is to be
poor in speech.” “The perfect writer will express himself as Junius,
when in the Junius frame of mind; when he feels as Lamb felt, will use
a like familiar speech; and will fall into the ruggedness of Carlyle
when in a Carlylean mood.” A man who should try to follow this advice
would be pretty sure to be Jack-of-all-styles and master of none. What
a piece of patchwork his composition would be! A “specific style” is
not to be avoided; it is to be cultivated and practiced till every
false note, every trace of crudeness and insincerity, is purged out of
it.
The secret of good prose is a subtle quality or flavor, hard to define,
like that of a good apple or a good melon, and it is as intimately
bound up in the very substance and texture in the one case as in the
other, and, we may add, is of as many varieties. We are sure always to
get good prose from Mr. Howells and Colonel Higginson, but we are not
always so sure of getting it from certain of our younger novelists.
Here is a sample of bad prose from a popular novel by a Southern
writer:--
“The whole woods emerged from the divine bath of nature with the
coolness, the freshness, the immortal purity of Diana united to the
roseate glow and mortal tenderness of Venus, and haunted by two
spirits: the chaste, unfading youth of Endymion and the dust-born
warmth and eagerness of Dionysus.”
Yet the man who could permit himself the use of such inflated language
as that, was capable of turning off such a passage as this:--
“Some women, in marrying, demand all and give all: with good men they
are happy; with base men they are the broken-hearted. Some demand
everything and give little: with weak men they are tyrants; with strong
men they are the divorced. Some demand little and give all: with
congenial souls they are already in heaven; with uncongenial they are
soon in their graves. Some give little and demand little: they are the
heartless, and they bring neither the joy of life nor the peace of
death.”
That is sound prose; it is like a passage from a great classic.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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