and well chosen; it’s the right word." It was a revelation to me at the
time that one word was better than another if they both meant the same
thing. On thinking it over, I saw that no two words do mean exactly the
same thing, and that there is only one right word in a hundred to
express exactly your meaning and to give life to it. The other
ninety-and-nine words are but poor relations--nay! they are all dead
corpses.
Perhaps you remember Millais’ wonderfully popular picture called
"Cinderella." A beautiful healthy English child, with deep dreamy eyes
and long wavy golden hair sits on a stool by the kitchen fire holding in
her hand a birch broom emblem of her kitchen toil. It is a fascinating
picture. At home I look on a coloured print of it nearly every day of
the week. The most brilliant thing on the canvas is the patch of
scarlet in the dainty cap the child wears. That single dab of red seems
to concentrate in itself the whole colour-scheme of the picture. It is
the keynote. Now a single word in a sentence sometimes gives a
startling effect. It strikes a strong, clear, ringing note which keys
the writer’s passing mood, fascinates us with its vividness, and sticks
in the memory ever after. It is a colour-patch in literary art which
dominates the picture and arrests attention, as in Shakespeare’s
"Every yesterday hath lighted fools
The way to _dusty_ death!"
Or,
"The _primrose_ path to the eternal bonfire."
Or Pope’s
"Quick effluvia darting through the brain
Die of a rose in _aromatic_ pain."
Also
"Cease, fond Nature, cease thy strife,
And let me _languish_ into life."
And Gray’s inimitable couplet:
"There pipes the song-thrush, and the skylark there
Scatters his _loose_ notes in the waste of air."
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
Reviews
Reviews
No reviews yet
Be the first to share your thoughts on this work.
Join the Discussion
Join the discussion
Sign in to leave a comment or review.
Sign InorCreate an account