[Line: 2 twists] _1647_, _1651_, _1653_, and others 'twist'd',
which is very like the time.]
[Line: 10 both sexes] _1677_ and later '_the_ sexes'.]
[Line: 13 I do not know whether it is worth while to point out
that catalectic or seven-syllabled lines with trochaic effect
(cf. 9. this, 16, and others), as well as complete trochaic
dimeters (1, 2, &c.), occur more frequently here than in
_The Senses' Festival_, _Fuscara_, &c. This, though of
course Milton has it, was rather more frequent in Randolph's
generation than in Cleveland's.]
[Line: 22 _1647_, _1651_, _1677_, and later 'faction', but
'factions' _1653_.]
[Line: 25 _1651_, _1653_ &c. '_It_ would', which can hardly be
right. On the other hand _1677_ and its follower have '_With_
Regulus his' (l. 26).]
[Line: 31 It can hardly be necessary to interpret this famous
and charming phrase.]
[Line: 48 Line shortened to the trochaic run in _1677_, &c. by
dropping 'is'.]
[Line: 52 'Lycomedes' puzzled the earlier printers, who in
_1647_ and _1651_ make it 'Nicomedes' (corrupted by _1653_ to
'Nichomedes')--a curiously awkward blunder, as it happens.]
[Line: 56 the left _1647_, _1653_: thy left _1651_.]
[Line: 58 The late edition of _1687_, when 'regularity' was
becoming a fetish, inserted 'all' before 'alone', though
_1677_--its standard for the genuine poems--has not got it,
and it is not wanted.]
[Line: 59 heteroclite part] _1677_ and its followers, puzzled
by this, the original, reading, read 'apart' (apostrophating
'Het'roclite'), the sense of which is not clear; while Mr.
Berdan would emend to 'heteroclitic', which is unnecessary.
Cleveland may well have scanned 'heter[=o]clite', which is by
no means an extravagant licence, and has been paralleled by
Longfellow in 'Eur[=o]clydon'. Indeed, since I wrote this
note Mr. Simpson has furnished me with a parallel of
'heter[=o]clite' itself from Harl. MS. 4126, f. 102.]
[Line: 60 but thy heart _1649_: not the heart _1651_, _1653_.]
[Line: 62 'But' _1677_: 'And' in earlier texts.]
The Author's Hermaphrodite.
(Made after Mr. Randolph's death, yet inserted into his Poems.)
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