Authors, English -- 20th century -- Biography; Waugh, Alec, 1898-1981
That is not the way to make a good story--to tack an old situation on to
a new one. I should have to find a different ending somehow; it was no
good setting out to write it yet. For want of anything better to do, I
walked out and began to weed the garden. But though I weeded the
flower-beds in front of the house, and did valiant work with a hoe
among the cabbages, no idea had come to me by lunch-time. And, though I
spent the whole afternoon before a jigsaw puzzle, the most restful of
all pursuits, tea-time found my mind a blank, and in this state it
remained until a friend, to whom I had related the incident, made a most
pertinent remark:
“Why, if the girl could see her face reflected in the photograph, did
she not see the young man take the money from her purse?”
I sat in surprised silence. Why had I not thought of that before?
“Yes,” I said, “but if she saw, why didn’t she say something?”
“That’s for you to find out.”
And for the next three days I searched my mind for reasons for her
silence.
At last I began to see the glimmerings of a tale, the fifth that I had
constructed about this romantic couple. And this is what I saw: a shy
young man from the provinces comes up to London with an introduction to
some wealthy friends. There is a daughter whom he thinks very beautiful,
and with whom he thinks that he might in a short while find himself in
love. And he suggests very timidly that it would be nice if she would
show him “round the sights,” for he wants to see London, and has no
other friends in it. And, as these wealthy people have advanced views,
or perhaps because the daughter has succeeded in impressing her views
upon her parents, his suggestion is accepted; the result is a lunch at
the Criterion, a theatre, and tea afterwards. As they seem to be
getting on rather well together, he suggests a dinner-party. He would
like to see Soho.
“Oh, but I must go back and ask mother first,” she says.
“Really?”
“Of course; it’s very nice of her to let me out at all. I must go back
and ask her.”
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