And so with regard to that poem which is, on the whole, Rossetti’s
masterpiece—‘Sister Helen’—sent as early as 1854 to Mrs. Howitt for the
German publication the _Düsseldorf Annual_; the changes in it are
extremely interesting. Never did it appear in print without suffering
some important variation. Sometimes, indeed, the change of a word or two
in a line would entirely transfigure the stanza. As to the new stanzas
added to the ballad just before Rossetti’s death, these turned the ballad
from a fine poem into a great one.
Equally striking are the changes in ‘The Blessed Damosel.’ But the most
notable example of the surety of his hand in revising is seen in regard
to a poem several times mentioned in this volume, called originally
‘Bride’s Chamber Talk.’ It was begun as early as ‘Jenny,’ read by
Allingham in 1860, but not printed till more than a quarter of a century
later. The earliest form is still in existence in MS., and although some
of the lines struck out are as poetry most lovely, the poem on the whole
is better without them. It was a theory of Rossetti’s, indeed, that the
very riches of the English language made it necessary for the poet who
would achieve excellence to revise and manipulate his lines. And in
support of this he would contrast the amazing passion for revision
disclosed by Dr. Garnett’s ‘Relics of Shelley,’ in which sometimes
scarcely half a dozen of the original words are left on a page, with
Scott’s metrical narratives, which were sent to the printer in cantos as
they were written, like one of the contemporary novels thrown off for the
serials. The fact seems to be, however, that the poet’s power of
reaching, as Scott reached, his own ideal expression _per saltum_, or
reaching it slowly and tentatively, is simply a matter of temperament.
For whose verses are more loose-jointed than Byron’s? whose diction is
more commonplace than his? And yet this is what the greatest of Byron
specialists, Mr John Murray, says in his extremely interesting remarks
upon Byron’s autograph:—
“If we except Byron’s dramatic pieces and ‘Don Juan,’ the first draft
of Byron’s longer poems formed but a nucleus of the work as it was
printed. For example, ‘English Bards and Scotch Reviewers’ grew out
of the ‘British Bards,’ while ‘The Giaour,’ by constant additions to
the manuscript, the proofs, and even to the work after publication,
was expanded to nearly twice its original size. . . . When the
inspiration was on him, the printer had to be kept at work the
greater part of the night, and fresh ‘copy’ and fresh revises were
crossing one another hour by hour.”
The conclusion is that poets cannot be classified according to their
methods of work, but only in relation to the result of those methods, and
that our two great elaborators, Byron and Rossetti, may still be more
unlike each other in essentials than are any other two nineteenth-century
poets.
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