Massinger, Philip, 1583-1640 -- Criticism and interpretation
MS.: He bears himself like a king.
II., 2, 142.—MS.: Ceutha deleted before Afric.
II., 2, 165.—C.: Cannot near you.
MS.: Cannot hear you.
II., 2, 205.—C.: Filled.
MS.: Filed.
II., 2, 209.—MS.: And hath keeps a whore in Corinth.
“Hath” deleted.
II., 2, 217.—MS.: In the royal monument of Hib the Asian kings.
(?) The author started to write “Hiberian kings.”
II., 2, 240.—MS.: Rebellion delivery or restoring.
“Rebellion” deleted; it occurred in the previous line.
II., 2, 253.—C.:
With reverence to
This place, thou liest.
MS.: Setting aside, with reverence to
Thy place, the state, thou liest.
“Setting aside” and “thy place” deleted.
II., 2, 255.—C.: By being ...
MS.: By being libb’d, and my disability
To deflower thy sisters.
II., 2, 256.—C.: I (bow to) your goddess.
MS.: Thank your goddess.
“Thy” deleted under “your.”
II., 2, 285.—MS.:
Of brave and able men that might have stood
In opposition for the defence.
“That might” down to “opposition” inserted in same hand above the line.
II., 2, 289.—C.: For my confed’rates.
MS.: For my confederates.
Required by metre.
II., 2, 328.—MS.: Word deleted before Antiochus. Sebastian would scan.
II., 2, 335.—MS.: With your accustomed clemency wisdom you’ll perceive.
“Clemency” deleted.
II., 2, 346.—MS.: Such depositions as they pleased knew would make.
“Pleased” deleted.
II., 2, 368.—MS.: Word deleted under “Carthage.” (?) Venice.
III., 1, 20.—MS.: “Europe” deleted under “Afric.”
III., 1, 22.—MS.: “To the good king Hiero” deleted under “To the
pro-consul Marcellus.”
III., 1, 47.—C.: You’ll find there that they.
MS.: You shall find there that.
(A nominative is wanted; unless for “there” we read “them”)
III., 1, 62.—C.: To my (aid).
MS.: To my wish.
III., 1, 91.—MS.: There’s thy reward.
Underneath “there’s,” “take” deleted.
III., 1, 103.—C.:
Your travail’s ended, mine begins; I take my leave.
Formality of manner now is useless.
MS.: Your travail’s ended, mine begins, and therefore
Sans ceremonie I will take my leave.
“Sans ceremonie” deleted, and “formality ... useless” added at the end of
the line. The author omitted to cancel “I take my leave.”
III., 2, 31.—C.: Thou thin gut!
MS.: You thin gut!
III., 2, 35.—MS.: Cancels from “Jove! if thou art” to 38, “They come.”
III., 2, 36.—C.: Change not Jove’s purpose.
MS.: Change not you Jove’s purpose.
III., 2, 106.—MS.:
I will conjure him
If revenge hath any spells.
Cancelled in MS.
III., 3, 132.—C.: Will but—I spare comparisons.
(?) Punctuate: Will—but I spare comparisons.
III., 3, 150.—MS.: Of such such as are.
Second “such” deleted.
III., 3, 151.—MS.: Bithynia covered with our knights armies.
“Knights” deleted.
III., 3, 166.—MS.: And more than my his caution to you; but now peace or
war.
“And more than my” deleted. The previous line had begun with these words.
Was the author copying a former draft of the scene?
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