Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyam, Rendered into English Verse — John Shaqi
Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyam, Rendered into English VerseOmar Khayyam
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Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyam, Rendered into English Verse
Omar Khayyam
Persian poetry -- Translations into English
Wake! For the Sun before him into Night
A signal flung that put the Stars to flight;
And, to the field of Heav'n ascending, strikes
The Sultán's Turret with a Shaft of Light.
The tenth quatrain read thus in the Third Edition:
Well, let it take them! What have we to do
With Kaikobád the Great, or Kaikhosrú?
Let Zál and Rustum thunder as they will,
Or Hátim Tai "To supper!"--heed not you.
In the first draught of Third Edition the thirty-eighth verse was as
follows:
For, in your Ear a moment--of the same
Poor Earth from which that Human whisper came,
The luckless Mould in which Mankind was cast
They did compose, and call'd him by the name.
In the final draught of the Third Edition it was changed to read:
Listen--a moment listen!--Of the same
Poor Earth from which that Human Whisper came,
The luckless Mould in which Mankind was cast
They did compose, and call'd him by the name.
In the first draught of Third Edition quatrain forty ran thus:
As then the Tulip from her wonted sup
Of Wine from Heav'n her little Tass lifts ups
Do you, twin offspring of the soil, till Heav'n
To Earth invert you like an empty cup.
The first draught of the Third Edition carried quatrain forty-two as
follows:
And if the Cup, and if the Lip you press,
End in what All begins and ends in--Yes;
Imagine then you _are_ what heretofore
You _were_--hereafter you shall not be less.
Quatrain forty-eight in the first draught of Third Edition read:
A Moment's Halt--a momentary taste
Of BEING from the Well amid the Waste--
Before the starting Caravan has reach'd
The Nothing it set out from--Oh, make haste!
In the final draught of Third Edition the same stanza ran:
A Moment's Halt--a momentary taste
Of BEING from the Well amid the Waste--
And Lo!--the phantom Caravan has reach'd
The Nothing it set out from--Oh, make haste!
In the first draught of the Third Edition, there stood the following
quatrain, later deleted:
Better, oh, better, cancel from the Scroll
Of Universe one luckless Human Soul,
Than drop by drop enlarge the Flood that rolls
Hoarser with Anguish as the Ages Roll.
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Transcriber's Notes:
4. Because the nature of this work is to present and compare the several
translations, no spelling or end of sentence punctuation corrections
have been made in the Quatrains. The reader will encounter several
Quatrains that end without punctuation and the word "Paradist"
appearing in Quatrain LXXXI in the "Fifth Edition" may be a
typographical error for "Paradise," but has been retained as printed.
5. Spelling corrections made in Biographical Preface:
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