Man-woman relationships -- Fiction; Poor families -- Fiction; Young women -- Fiction
I looked perplexed at the letter in his hands, but could see nothing,
and asked him to make himself understood more clearly. At that request
he smiled--not, however, the malicious smile of old--and said:
"The verses lack all shape."
"Shape?" I asked, astonished and a little hurt. "What shape are they to
have?"
"Proper shape; the whole versification is wrong. Look here."
After that he began to read aloud and very slowly, making remarks
in between the lines--such as: "There is a foot short in that line;
and one foot too many in that one; in that other line the time goes
too quick, and here again it goes too slow; the proper metre of the
whole ought to be something like this." He read the poem over again,
but put in the missing feet by syllables of his own invention, and
left out what he thought too much. I had never in all my life heard
anything like it, and listened to every word most attentively. After
the quarter of an hour and a few minutes more had passed we parted, and
I walked home filled with new ideas. As soon as I could find time I
examined more of my verses and discovered the same unevenness in their
construction.
When I met my friend out on the balcony (I am not sure whether
accidentally or otherwise) a few days later, he handed me two books, a
large one and a small one. "This one here is a grammar of the German
language because--" and now he smiled a kind indulgent smile--"you can't
spell your own language yet ... and this is a book on the construction
of poems. It will tell you more clearly than I am able what you have to
do, and what you must not do in writing your poems."
I thanked him very much for the books, but when I looked them through
in the evening, I thought the German grammar most tedious, and the book
on the "construction of verses" hopelessly unintelligible.
"It is impossible," I said to myself, "to write in accordance with
these books; if I had to do it I simply could write no more." I put the
books away, and wrote my poems in the same style as before. A whole
week passed before I saw my friend again, and he asked me at once how I
liked the books. I was rather ashamed to tell the truth about them and
answered that they were all right.
"Did you write anything?"
I showed him my last poem. He read it very carefully and then returned
it.
"The thoughts expressed in it are beautiful as they are always, and it
is such a pity that you don't study the two books a little more."
"How do you know that?"
"Well, I can see it; if you had taken the slightest trouble with them
you could not very well have made such great mistakes."
At first I felt ashamed, but then I grew sulky.
"The books are both very silly," I said, "and I do not think that I
shall use them."
"Then you mean to remain a nursery-maid all your life?"
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