Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616 -- Stage history; Theater -- England
The stage-directions at the head of the second scene, both in the Globe
edition and folio, place Hamlet's name after the Queen's, to indicate the
order to be observed by the actors when they come on to the stage. In the
second quarto, however, Hamlet's name comes last. As he has an antipathy
to the King, and is displeased with his mother, it is not likely he would
be much in the company of either, not even on State occasions, for Hamlet
regards the King as a usurper. I would venture to suggest, then, that
Hamlet should enter last of all, from another doorway to that used by the
King and his train, having his hat and cloak in his hand, as if he had
come to take leave of the Court before starting for Wittenberg.
Passing on now to the fourth scene, I notice that in the acting-edition
the last five lines of the scene have been cut out, including that
expressive one--
"Something is rotten in the state of Denmark."
I do not myself sympathize with this cutting out the end of scenes, as is
done so persistently in every acted play of Shakespeare's. It is
inartistic, because it is done to allow the principal actor to leave the
stage with applause. Besides, it creates a habit, with actors, of trying
to make points at the end of scenes, whether it is necessary or not, and
this distorts the play and delays its progress.
In the fifth scene the line--
"O horrible, horrible, most horrible"--
spoken by the Ghost, is marked in the acting-edition to be spoken by
Hamlet. Such an alteration is unwarranted by the text. The first quarto,
by making Hamlet exclaim "O God" after the Ghost has said "O horrible,"
gives indication that the words "O horrible" were spoken on the
Elizabethan stage by the Ghost.
An alteration has also been made in the Ghost's last line, which to some
may appear a trivial matter. The folio attaches the word "Hamlet" to the
"Adieu," and puts a colon between it and the words "Remember me," showing
thereby that a slight pause should be made before these two last words are
spoken, in order to make them more impressive; and the first quarto gives
the same reading. French's acting-version, however, tacks the name on to
the "Remember me." Cumberland's version gives the reading of the second
quarto, which I think the best--
"Adieu, adieu, adieu, Remember me."
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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