Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616 -- Stage history; Theater -- England
At line 381, in the Globe edition, Polonius is marked to enter and speak
on the stage the line "Well be with you, gentlemen." In the acting-edition
he is marked to speak this "_without_" (to whom? certainly not to the
players; Polonius would not have addressed them in such terms), and to
enter at a cue lower down the page. The alteration is an instance of what
I consider the wrong principle adopted in making stage-versions. The
actors have preferred thinking Shakespeare wrong to using a little
ingenuity to meet his stage-directions. They have said: "It will never do
to have Polonius stand still saying nothing while Hamlet is making fun of
him to Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, so he must speak his line off the
stage." Would it not have shown more consideration for the author's text
to make Polonius enter where directed, and then find something for him to
do after he is on the stage? For instance, he might enter from a side
entrance, as if summoned by the sound of the trumpet, move hastily towards
the back of the stage, where the new-comers would arrive, and greet
Hamlet, Rosencrantz, and Guildenstern, as he passes them, with the words,
"Well be with you, gentlemen."
The wording in the acting-version of the stage-direction, "_Enter four or
five_ Players _and two_ Actresses," is questionable. Perhaps it is not a
matter of great consequence, unless the period chosen for representation
be the Elizabethan one, and I would suggest that this is the most
appropriate period for the play, because to adopt an early Danish period
is contradictory to the text, and overloads the piece with material
foreign to the author's intentions. Shakespeare's thoughts were not in
Denmark when he wrote this play.
Hamlet's recitation of Priam's slaughter in the acting-version has been
cut down from thirteen to three lines, and I venture to think unwisely.
Hamlet has chosen these lines because they express in biting words his
contempt for the King, his uncle, and the audience should become aware of
this by the marked emphasis Hamlet lays on each epithet applied to
Pyrrhus.
I am sorry that Hamlet's line to the Player, "He's for a jig, or a tale of
bawdry, or else he sleeps," has been cut out. Besides being a fine hit at
Polonius, it is an instructive piece of sarcasm. Playgoers in the
twentieth century need as much to be told the truth as those in the
sixteenth.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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