“On the glacier, the light of a day still to be born put out our
candles.... We halted to watch the procession of the sun. He came
out of the uttermost parts of the earth, very slowly, lighting peak
after peak in the long southward array, dwelling for a moment,
and then passing on. Opposite, and first to catch the glow, were
the great mountains of the Saasgrat and the Weisshorn. _But more
beautiful, like the loom of some white-sailed ship far out at sea,
each unnamed and unnumbered peak of the east took and reflected the
radiance of the morning._ The light mists which came before the sun
faded.”...
Like the other passage this brief description starts a train of
memories; but, whereas the first passage would convey little to a
non-climber, Sir Claud Schuster has really thought out the sequence
of the dawn, and has caught one of its finer and subtler effects by
the use of a very happy analogy. The phrase which we have ventured to
italicise defines in a few words a brief scene in the drama of the
dawn, an impression that could not be conveyed by piling adjective on
adjective.
There are many writers who have captured the romance of mountaineering,
far fewer who have the gift for that happy choice of words that gives
the essence of a particular Alpine view. Pick up any Alpine classic at
a venture, and you will find that not one writer in fifty can hold your
attention through a long passage of descriptive writing. The average
writer piles on his adjectives. From the Alpine summit you can see a
long way. The horizon seems infinitely far off. The valleys sink below
into profound shadows. The eye is carried from the dark firs upward to
the glittering snowfields. “The majestic mass of the ... rises to the
north, and blots out the lesser ranges of the.... The awful heights of
the ... soar upwards from the valley of.... In the east, we could just
catch a glimpse of the ... and our guides assured us that in the west
we could veritably see the distant snows of our old friend the....” And
so on, and so forth. Fill in the gaps, and this skeleton description
can be made to fit the required panorama. It roughly represents nine
out of ten word pictures of Alpine views. Examine Whymper’s famous
description of the view from the Matterhorn. It is little more than
a catalogue of mountains. There is hardly a phrase in it that would
convey the essential atmosphere of such a view to a man who had not
seen it.
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