American prose literature; English prose literature; Narration (Rhetoric)
“Good shot,” commented Cousin Jim. “Landed them nicely.” Something
happened inside Freeman; something analogous to hot sun on a misty
meadow, or a wind on a fog-bound sea. He had killed two ducks: and he
thought he knew just how he had killed them. You threw your aim at
the body, and then swung your muzzle up and pulled trigger just as
the head disappeared from view. He discovered in himself an intense
eagerness for the next lot to come in, so he could try again. The
blood was singing through his body. No longer did he feel cold or
disgruntled. Also he wanted to be chatty; which shows that those two
ducks had stirred Freeman up considerably. Minnie would not have
known her darling brother had she been able at that moment to see
his inner self accurately depicted in outward semblance. The latter
manifestation would have been that of a blithe and skiptious person
who would have worn his hat on one side of his head.
More ducks came in from time to time, and Freeman had a chance to
test his theories. It is only in romantic fiction that the hero wins
the football match or licks the champion or cops off the million
in Wall Street without knowing a thing about football, boxing, or
finance. The idea was perfect; but ducks seemed to have no notion of
regularity or standardization. They never acted the same way twice
running. Still, out of a good many shots he did scratch down a few.
One of the great compensations in life is the fact that the glow from
a successful shot lasts a poor marksman longer than it does a good
one. And a casual remark of Cousin Jim’s supplied the one missing
ingredient. After the fifth duck had fallen to Freeman’s lavish burnt
offering of black powder he said:
“Pity you haven’t your own gun. There’s nothing that throws a man off
worse than shooting a strange gun, is there?” He seemed to speak as
one expert to another.
Freeman’s imagination, turned agile by the necessity of making this
extraordinary slaughter quite theoretically perfect, seized upon the
thought. Of course: couldn’t expect him to do himself justice with a
strange gun! In fact, considering that he was shooting a strange gun,
he was doing rather remarkably well! It is to be doubted if there
were many other duck shots, shooting a strange gun, who could equal
this! This aforementioned imagination merely neglected as unimportant
the fact that any gun whatever would be strange to Freeman.
The flight slackened. There were long intervals when there were no
birds in the sky. Cousin Jim remarked that it was too dinged warm
for the best shooting. Two hours before Freeman would probably have
meditated killing Cousin Jim for making that remark.
“Yes,” he said now, wisely, “and it looked last night as though that
north wind would bring a cold snap.”
“Well, we’ll smoke and keep our weather eye open; and there’ll be
the afternoon flight, anyway,” was Cousin Jim’s decision. “It’s sort
of pretty out here on the marsh, anyway.”
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