Of the former kind are the corrections in "Laodamia." That poem appeared
first in 1815, having been suggested during a course of classical
reading which Wordsworth had taken up for the purpose of directing the
studies of his son. Landor criticised this poem in the first volume of
his "Imaginary Conversations," and in the main very favorably; he makes
Porson say that parts of it "might have been heard with shouts of
rapture in the regions he describes"; he calls it "a composition such as
Sophocles might have delighted to own." But he points out blemishes in
two stanzas, the first and the seventeenth; he blames the execution of
one and the thought of the other. Wordsworth rewrote both of them, and I
quote the second passage as affording the more interesting change. In
the first edition Protesilaus, says the poet, returning from the shades
to visit Laodamia,
Spake, as a witness, of a second birth
For all that is most perfect upon earth.
On this Landor remarks, putting the words into Porson's mouth:
How unseasonable is the allusion to _witness_ and _second_
birth, which things, however holy and venerable in
themselves, come stinking and reeking to us from the
conventicle. I desire to see Laodamia in the silent and
gloomy mansion of her beloved Protesilaus; not elbowed by
the godly butchers in Tottenham court road, nor smelling
devoutly of ratafia among the sugar bakers' wives at
Blackfriars.
Wordsworth dropped these lines; and we now read instead, that the hero
Spake of heroic arts in graver mood
Revived, with finer harmony pursued.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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