The Girl's Own Paper, Vol. XX. No. 1028, September 9, 1899Various
General
The Girl's Own Paper, Vol. XX. No. 1028, September 9, 1899
Various
Children's literature -- Periodicals
MAYFLOWER.—We cannot undertake any criticism by post (_vide_ rules
in June and other numbers). There is nothing at all original in
your verses, and it would, we fear, be useless for you to think of
publication. At the same time they are a pleasant exercise for you in
composition, and you appear to have a good ear for rhyme. You should
not, however, change your metre in the middle of a poem, as you do
in “Past and Present” and “Darkness and Dawn.” In “Spring” you will
observe that “The birds are gaily singing” is a line of different
cadence from “And the birds so bright and gay,” yet each occupies the
same place (second) in the verse.
A BLUNDERER.—Spring again! Your letter is modest. Blank verse needs
to be exceedingly poetical in order to be satisfactory, as there is
no rhyme to help the ear. The fault of your composition is a negative
one: there is little in the lines to prevent them from being read as
prose, save the fact of their being placed below one another, and being
of equal length. “Must needs be always upward sent” is a specially
unmusical line. The metre you use is not appropriate to blank verse,
and if you wish to try again, we should advise you to write in rhyme.
DORA.—Spring once more! We do not wish to be unkind, for it is
perfectly natural that this season of the year should inspire a longing
to write, and we sympathise with you in saying “Often I try to put my
thoughts into words, but they fall very far short of the conception
of my brain.” We prefer your poem on “The Seasons” to those we have
just been criticising, but it is full of expressions that would not
pass muster, _e.g._, “her pearly satin brow,” “the mould of marble
cheeks.” The course of education to “fit you for a literary career”
must be varied and extensive, comprising an acquaintance with the best
literature of your own country, and of other countries also.
GWYNETH A. MANSERGH.—You might like _The Bird World_, by W. H. D.
Adams, illustrated by Giacomelli (Nelson), published at 8s., J. E.
Harting’s _Sketches of Bird-Life: Haunts and Habits_, illustrated (W.
H. Allen, 10s. 6d.), or Rev. J. G. Wood’s _Branch Builders_ (Longman,
2s. 6d.).
INTERNATIONAL CORRESPONDENCE.
M. ARAPIAN, care of British Post Office, Smyrna, Turkey, Asia Minor,
asks MISS ANICE E. CRESS if she would be so kind as to forward her
present address.
“IDA,” who has for some time been corresponding with FLORENCE JEFFERY
of 848, Columbus Avenue, New York, writes to say that the last letter
was returned with “not found” upon it. As “IDA” much enjoyed the
correspondence, she begs MISS JEFFERY to renew it. She would also like
to correspond with another English girl living abroad, aged about
nineteen.
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