There were strings of camels
On the Tunis sands.
There were certain cities
Holding out their hands.
Here the thing we call poetry asserts itself. The instinct for
remarkable phrase and striking figurative expression is either
inborn or it is not. Facility with rhyme and metre is not nearly so
remarkable. But when a child can write, as in the poem _My Husbands_,
I hear in soft recession
The praise they give to me;
I hear them chant my titles
From all antiquity.
it is almost uncanny. Here is, if you like, a somewhat derivative
diction, but here also is true poetry by every test.
He showed me like a master
That one rose makes a gown:
That looking up to Heaven
Is merely looking down.
Well, I not only wonder how she has learned simple finality of phrase
so quickly; I also wonder whether she can possibly realize the
philosophical implications of her best poems.
As for imagery, Nathalia’s angels hearing “the hurdy-gurdies in the
Candle-Maker’s Row” is an example of her fancy that quickens into
imagination. She sees the Oriental bees flying “in golden convoys to
the mountains of the moon,” she quizzically presents the pathos of _The
Dinosaurs’ Eggs_; she has “steered by stars that sorrowed, with the
moonlight in our wake”; she sees Berkley Common
Like a manuscript, all yellow, and with many things deleted,
Yet a manuscript completed, with embellishments most rare,
Berkley Common lies forgotten, with its fields of everlasting,
And the sunlight on the windows of the empty houses there.
As to exactly what she is trying to say in _The Symbols_, I am in
doubt, but it is hard to forget the Talmud stalking like a rabbi in a
gown.
On the one hand, with Nathalia, we have simply a rhyming gift turned
to amusing descriptions of certain fairly ordinary episodes and
characteristics of life that interest every healthily alert young
lady. On the other hand, we have the beginnings of a poet with a true
ear for rhythm, an eye for the color of words, and a fancy that often
rises into the realm of imagination. I only hope that the young lady
will continue to enjoy all the ordinary incidents of her existence as
much as she has heretofore, and to perfect her technique in her spare
moments. It needs perfecting. It is hardly to be wondered at that her
work is still in the experimental stage. She is not yet “the youngest
of the seers,” nor yet “released from fetters of ancestral pose,” but
there is undoubtedly conquest of poetic beauty “waiting down the years”
for her--“revisions of the ruby and the rose,” as she puts it. Read
the first two verses of _The Vestal_ and marvel that a young lady of
Nathalia’s age should be able to master without effort such a perfectly
Emily Dickinsonian idiom. This is no copy; it is something that even
Emily Dickinson would not have been at all ashamed to have written. And
that is a good deal to say.
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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