The Little Review, August 1917 (Vol. 4, No. 4) — John Shaqi
The Little Review, August 1917 (Vol. 4, No. 4)Various
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The Little Review, August 1917 (Vol. 4, No. 4)
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Literature, Modern -- 20th century -- Periodicals
If I dispraise Tagore now I can only say that I was among the first to
praise him before he became a popular fad. The decadence of Tagore may
be measured. His first translations were revised by W. B. Yeats; later
translations by Evelyn Underhill, facilis et perfacilis descensus, and
now they say he has taken to writing in English, a language for which he
has no special talent. If his first drafts contained such clichés as
“sunshine in my soul”, he was at least conscious at that time of his
defects. Praise was rightly given to his first poems because it was
demonstrated and demonstrable that they were well done in Bengali, i. e.
that they were written in a precise and objective language, and in a
metric full of interest and variety. The popular megaphone took up
phrases made to define the originals and applied them to the
translations. Imagine a criticism of Herrick and Campion applied to a
French or German prose translation of these poets, however excellent as
a translation in prose! As the vulgarizer hates any form of literary
excellence, he was well content with obscuring the real grounds for
praise. The unimportant element, that which has made Tagore the prey of
religiose nincompoops, might easily have passed without comment.
However, it has proved the baccillus of decay. Sir Rabindranath having
been raised in a country where the author need not defend himself
against blandishment ... I mean the force of the babu press is scarcely
enough to turn anyone’s head or his judgement.... Sir Rabindranath is
not particularly culpable. His disciples may bear the blame as best they
may; along with his publishers. But no old established publishing house
cares a damn about literature; and once Tagore had become a commercial
property, they could scarcely be expected to care for his literary
integrity.
He might still wash and be clean; that is to say there is still time for
him to suppress about three fourths of the stuff he has published in
English, and retain some sort of literary position.
Another man who stands in peril is Edgar Masters. He did a good job in
_The Spoon River Anthology_. What is good in it is good in common with
like things in the Greek anthology, Villon and Crabbe: plus Masters’s
sense of real people. The work as a whole needs rewriting. The
difference between a fine poem and a mediocre one is often only the fact
that the good poet could force himself to rewrite. “No appearance of
labour?” No, there need be no appearance of labour. I have seen too many
early drafts of known and accepted poems not to know the difference
between a draft and the final work. Masters must go back and take the
gobbetts of magazine cliché out of his later work; he must spend more
time on _Spoon River_ if he wants his stuff to last as Crabbe’s
_Borough_ has lasted. There is a great gulph between a “successful” book
and a book that endures; that endures even a couple of centuries.
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