The Little Review, June-July 1916 (Vol. 3, No. 4) — John Shaqi
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Wind rushes
Over the dunes,
And the coarse salt-crusted grass
Answers.
Heu,
It whips round my ankles!
This is only one-half of the poem, but it will serve to show this poet’s
method. Here Hermes is identified with the yellow barrier of sand dunes
which breaks the wind, and splits it into three directions, as it comes
in from the sea. The scenery and the feeling are not Greek. In fact, as
someone has pointed out, the whole poem might have been called “The
Coast of New Jersey.” But just as Coleridge found a way to give a
feeling of the emptiness of the sea by narrating the tale of a legendary
voyage on it, so H. D. has given us the eternal quality of the New
Jersey coast by identifying its savagery with Greek myth.
The difference between H. D.’s poetry and Aldington’s is therefore a
difference between an apparent complexity which cannot be analysed,
since it is really the simplest synthesis of primitive feeling, and a
studied simplicity which on analysis, reveals itself as something very
complex and modern. Aldington’s work when studied carefully, raises
questions about our life: H. D. goes deeper and offers us an eternal
answer. With the single exception of the _Choricos_, I know of no work
of H. D.’s which is not superior to Aldington’s in rhythm, as I know of
no work of Aldington’s which does not seem to have more unsolved
problems underlying its thought. Aldington is monodic, H. D. is
strophaic: Aldington writes on many themes: H. D. on two or three: H.
D.’s art is more perfect within its limits; Aldington’s is more
interesting because of its very human imperfection.
There is another short thing of H. D.’s which fulfils perfectly the
Greek dictum that a picture is a silent poem, a poem a speaking picture:
Whirl up, sea—
whirl your pointed pines,
splash your great pines,
over our rocks.
Hurl your green over us,
cover us with your pools of fir.
A chorus of Oreads might very well have sung that to the wind. Over and
over again, H. D. never tires of giving us the sea, the rocks, the
pines, the sunlight. There is such a hard brightness of sunlight in some
of the poems that it makes us fairly dizzy with its intensity:
O wind,
rend open the heat,
cut apart the heat,
rend it sideways.
Fruit cannot drop
through this thick air:
fruit cannot fall into heat
that presses up and blunts
the points of pears
and rounds the grapes.
Cut the heat,
plough through it,
turning it on either side
of your path.
These poems are like cries to unknown gods. Some are simply stark in
their dramatic magnificence:
The Wind Sleepers
Whiter
than the crust
left by the tide,
we are stung by the hurled sand
and the broken shells.
We no longer sleep,
sleep in the wind,
we awoke and fled
through the Peiraeic gate.
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