Butler, Samuel, 1835-1902 -- Notebooks, sketchbooks, etc.
I said what comes to the same thing as this in _Life and Habit_ in 1877,
and I repeated it in the preface to my translation of the _Iliad_ in
1898. I do not believe George Meredith has said anything to the same
effect, but I have read so very little of that writer, and have so
utterly rejected what I did read, that he may well have done so without
my knowing it. He damned _Erewhon_, as Chapman and Hall’s reader, in
1871, and, as I am still raw about this after 28 years, (I am afraid
unless I say something more I shall be taken as writing these words
seriously) I prefer to assert that the _Times_ writer was quoting from my
preface to the _Iliad_, published a few weeks earlier, and fathering the
remark on George Meredith. By the way the _Times_ did not give so much
as a line to my translation in its “Books of the Week,” though it was
duly sent to them.
Froude and Freeman
I think it was last Saturday (Ap. 9) (at any rate it was a day just
thereabouts) the _Times_ had a leader on Froude’s appointment as Reg.
Prof. of Mod. Hist. at Oxford. It said Froude was perhaps our greatest
living master of style, or words to that effect, only that, like Freeman,
he was too long: i.e. only he is an habitual offender against the most
fundamental principles of his art. If then Froude is our greatest master
of style, what are the rest of us?
There was a much better article yesterday on Marbot, on which my namesake
A. J. Butler got a dressing for talking rubbish about style. [1892.]
Style
In this day’s _Sunday Times_ there is an article on Mrs. Browning’s
letters which begins with some remarks about style. “It is recorded,”
says the writer, “of Plato, that in a rough draft of one of his
Dialogues, found after his death, the first paragraph was written in
seventy different forms. Wordsworth spared no pains to sharpen and
polish to the utmost the gifts with which nature had endowed him; and
Cardinal Newman, one of the greatest masters of English style, has
related in an amusing essay the pains he took to acquire his style.”
I never knew a writer yet who took the smallest pains with his style and
was at the same time readable. Plato’s having had seventy shies at one
sentence is quite enough to explain to me why I dislike him. A man may,
and ought to take a great deal of pains to write clearly, tersely and
euphemistically: he will write many a sentence three or four times
over—to do much more than this is worse than not rewriting at all: he
will be at great pains to see that he does not repeat himself, to arrange
his matter in the way that shall best enable the reader to master it, to
cut out superfluous words and, even more, to eschew irrelevant matter:
but in each case he will be thinking not of his own style but of his
reader’s convenience.
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