The Ordeal of Richard Feverel: A History of a Father and SonMeredith, George
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The Ordeal of Richard Feverel: A History of a Father and Son
Meredith, George
Domestic fiction; England -- Fiction; Fathers and sons -- Fiction
But Meredith's gift of phrase and his knack of knocking out
epigrams, and his mastery over metaphor and lyrical description
cannot be too highly commended. Diana is "wind-blown but ascending."
When Redworth sees her kindling a fire, "a little mouse of a thought
scampered out of one of the chambers of his head and darted along
the passages, fetching a sweat to his brows." After Sandra's
singing, the stillness settled back again "like one folding up a
precious jewel." A dull professor "pores over a little inexactitude
in phrases and pecks at it like a domestic fowl." Of one who has
ceased to love we hear that "the passion in her was like a place of
waves evaporated to a crust of salt." Of a lady's letter we learn
that it "flourished with light strokes all over, like a field of the
bearded barley." Of a heroine we are told that: "She was not of the
creatures who are excited by an atmosphere of excitement; she took
it as the nymph of the stream her native wave, and swam on the flood
with expansive languor, happy to have the master passions about her;
one or two of which her dainty hand caressed fearless of a sting;
the lady patted them as her swans." There is brilliant illumination
in such comparisons, a light shed instantaneously upon traits and
mental experiences otherwise not to be revealed. When the Egoist
would affectionately approach his shrinking Clara, nothing could
better deliver the situation than Meredith's simile: "The gulf of a
caress hove in view like an enormous billow hollowing under the
curled ridge. She stooped to a buttercup; the monster swept by."
It is felicity in the use of rhetorical figure that enables Meredith
to characterize the style of a Carlyle as, "resembling either early
architecture or utter dilapidation, so loose and rough it seemed; a
wind-in-the-orchard style, that tumbled down here and there an
appreciable fruit with uncouth bluster; sentences without
commencement running to abrupt endings and smoke, like waves against
a sea wall, learned dictionary words giving a hand to street slang,
and accents falling on them haphazard, like slant rays from driving
clouds; all the pages in a breeze, the whole book producing a kind
of electrical agitation in the mind and the joints." It is
Meredith's gift for phrase that enables him to paint those wonderful
backgrounds for action which are the despair of common writers.
Sometimes the scenes are sketched in with but a touch or two of
suggestion. So, when Richard Feverel and Lucy spend an evening
afloat, Meredith writes: "Hanging between two heavens on the lake:
floating to her voice: the moon stepping over and through white
shoals of soft high clouds above and below: floating to her
voice--no other breath abroad! His soul went out of his body as he
listened." Or, when Richard, in gay company, passes a night at
Richmond, Meredith says simply: "Silver was seen far out on Thames.
The wine ebbed, and the laughter. Sentiment and cigars took up the
wondrous tale."
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