(“O son! what is this thou hast done why have you pronounced a curse on the Raja, under whose government we lived at ease; not a bird, nor a beast even was afflicted.) Add question mark after _done_ and change the semicolon to a question mark. (to say, “O abode of compassion you have shown great mercy in) add exclamation mark after _compassion_. Change “how their pride brought _Kawun and Koonbhkurun_ to such destruction” to _Rawun and Koombhkurun_. “you destroyed the great demon, _Kawun_: and whenever devils” to _Rawun_. [Chapter II] “On the hearing this, the Raja Pureechit said to Shookdeo” delete the first _the_. [Chapter III] “joining its hands, came before him Vishnù said to it” add period after _him_. [Chapter VI] “the lucky moment, and exact, ray of light, and having considered” delete the comma after _exact_. “on their foreheads, and given them pawn, (_betle_ leaf,) dismissed” to _betel_. “the lines of fate cannot _he_ effaced by one. For this reason” to _be_. [Chapter X] “went and saved the milk; _Whilst_ Krishnù, having broken the vessels” to _whilst_. [Chapter XII] “of the trees falling, exactly as they had _occured_” to _occurred_. [Chapter XIII] “Brother! this is some very _frighful_ cave, do not let us go inside” to _frightful_. [Chapter XIV] “Brothers! this is a nice place, why need _We_ go farther?” to _we_. [Chapter XVI] “Shree _Shoodeo_ said,--O great king! when Shree Krishnù” to _Shookdeo_. “of a kudum tree, placing, his head on the thigh of a companion.” Delete the second comma. [Chapter XXIV] (where the wives were cooking, and _said them_, “Shree Krishnù has) to _said to them_. [Chapter XXXI] (began to say,--“Tell me friend! where has Mohun gone) add comma after _me_. [Chapter XXXVII] (touch other persons.” _Krihsnù_ replied, “I will summon all the) to _Krishnù_. “and the _cowherdessess_ and cowherds, to celebrate with songs” to _cowherdesses_. [Chapter XLVI] “We will accomplish, whatever you may order us to perform.” Delete the comma. “First of all send an invitation to all their _brethen_” to _brethren_. “there is a demon, named _Sunkasoor_, in the form of a shell” to _Sunkhasoor_. [Chapter XLVII] “I will give an account now how Shree _Kishnù_ Chund brought” to _Krishnù_. (whether they still continued to love him Nund added, “Give me) add period after _him_. “although other bees _buz_ over it during the whole night” to _buzz_. [Chapter L] “O lord of the earth! when Shree _Khrishnù_ Jee heard these words” to _Krishnù_. [Chapter LI] “the descendants of Judoo with you, _proctect_ the fort.” to _protect_. [Chapter LII] (be released from it.” Shree Krishnù Jee; said, “Listen,) delete the semicolon. [Chapter LIII] “There is a saying, that it most fitting to contract marriages” add _is_ after _it_. “Raja _Rheekmuk_ was at first very sad, when he heard these” to _Bheekmuk_. “Rookum has given thee to Sissoopal; and now Rookmunee, you have become a queen.” add comma after _now_.