The Prem sagurCaturbhujamisra, active 17th century
Religion
The Prem sagur
Caturbhujamisra, active 17th century
Krishna (Hindu deity)
“pillars formed of sprouting _plaintain_ were fixed in the earth” to
_plantain_.
[Chapter LIV]
“Shree _Kishnù_ Chund, having thus inspired the brahmin” to _Krishnù_.
“to receive them: and having, met the bridegroom with great honour”
delete the comma.
“for the reception of the _bridegroon_ and his train, entertained” to
_bridegroom_.
[Chapter LV]
(performing the ceremony “Arta,” _showerd_ down flowers) to _showered_.
“where Rajas _Oorgursen_, Soorsen, Basoodeo and all the grandees” to
_Oogursen_.
[Chapter LVII]
“conferring happiness and wealth; _Worship_ it continually,” to
_worship_.
“and suffering great _afflction_, they began to weep and lament” to
_affliction_.
(explained all his anxieties to his wife His wife said, “O husband!)
add period after the first _wife_.
[Chapter LVIII]
“went thence to Akroor, joining his hands bowing his head,” add comma
after _hands_.
“and came to Shree Krishnù Chund, the _extirpater_ of grief” to
_extirpator_.
“and there was abundance All the distress and want that had been” add
period after _abundance_.
[Chapter LX]
“Tell me what answer I am to take back from you to this _requst_” to
_request_.
“he ate up all the _sweatmeats_ and other confections” to _sweetmeats_.
[Chapter LXI]
“abandoning your worship, _medidation_, prayers, penance and guidance”
to _meditation_.
[Chapter LXIII]
(at hearing Banasoor, thus address him, and began to say himself, “I
granted) delete the first comma and add _to_ after _say_.
“Shree _Krishuù_, will descend upon the earth in the family of Judoo”
to _Krishnù_.
(Chitrekha replied, “How shall he escape me?” _Chitreka_ proceeded to)
to _Chitrekha_.
[Chapter LXIV]
“Banasoor worshipping calling to mind, and meditating upon Shree
Muhadeo Jee” add comma after _worshipping_.
[Chapter LXV]
“as to reckon the number of cows Raja _Narug_ gave away” to _Nurug_.
[Chapter LXVI]
“all the cowherds’ _chidren_ came running out, when they saw the flag”
to _children_.
“all the materials, necessary for the festival were immediately
produced.” Delete the comma.
[Chapter LXIX]
“and all the _Kuoruvùs_ rose haughtily and went to their homes” to
_Kouruvùs_.
[Chapter LXXII]
“came Shree Krishnù Chund Jee; _Wherever_ they encamped, a handsome”
to _wherever_.
[Chapter LXXIII]
(I have still one desire.” Krishnù enquired, “What _it is_?”) to _is
it_.
“the world has been deceived by your delusive power you behave towards
us as a mortal” add exclamation mark after _power_.
“the money you have given me to whom shall I go now, and ask for
more?” add comma after _me_.
“my business is to keep watch in a _cemetry_, and to receive a tax” to
_cemetery_.
“and died from excess of the hunger _het hen_ endured, and afterwards”
to _he then_.
[Chapter LXXV]
“Do not use your _amrs_ against him, stand here and look on” to _arms_.
[Chapter LXXVI]
“clearing away what food was left, and the _treachers_, formed of
leaves” to _trenchers_.
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