Part I, page 60: occured -> occurred: 'then there occurred'. mightly
-> mighty: 'rose in a mighty leap'. sewing -> sowing: 'sowing death
among the ranks'. Jaton's -> Jotan's: 'Jotan's rescue'.
Part I, page 61: affect -> effect: 'beginning to take effect on the
disorganised warriors'. casualities -> casualties: 'result in
further casualties'. ' -> ": 'into those shadows"'.
Part I, page 62: inserted ": '"When morning comes'.
Part II, page 67: brough -> brought: 'the hours brought a fresh
flood of curses'. inserted .: 'to his lips.' inserted .: 'Here.'
Part II, page 68: inserted .: 'in his movements and expression.'
inserted .: 'bring us wine.'
Part II, page 69: inserted - after May:
'God-Whose-Name-May-Not-Be-Spoken-Aloud'.
Part II, page 73: continous -> continuous: 'in one continuous
motion.'
Part II, page 74: removed duplicate .: 'in his direction.'
Part II, page 76: hundreth -> hundredth: 'for the hundredth time'.
Part II, page 78: 'Trakor admitted sheepishly. "But I heard' ->
'Trakor admitted sheepishly, "but I heard'.
Part II, page 79, 110 and 111: '- - -' in text changed to '----'.
Part II, page 80: Rokut's -> Bokut's: 'He closed the door on Bokut's
unrelieved expression'. sandles -> sandals: 'strings of his
sandals'.
Part II, page 81: startingly -> startlingly: 'almost startlingly
handsome'.
Part II, page 83: inserted ,: 'glazed with pain, his'.
Part II, page 84: . -> ?: 'faded blue eyes?'. inserted ": '"And if I
persist'.
Part II, page 90: inprints -> imprints: 'imprints left by its feet.'
speciman -> specimen: 'specimen of perfect manhood'. worshipping ->
worshiping: 'hero-worshiping'.
Part II, page 91: marvelling -> marveling: 'marveling at the
change'.
Part II, page 94: inserted his: 'face with his own sleeping furs'.
Part II, page 95: inserted .: 'digested this information quickly.'
Part II, page 97: . -> ?: 'But do you have the right to sacrifice
the lives of the rest of us in a quest that is completely hopeless?'
Part II, page 99: inserted .: 'this time toward home.' trodding ->
treading: 'treading on snakes'.
Part II, page 100: worshipping -> worshiping: 'his worshiping
companion'.
Part II, page 103: wais -> waist: 'waist-high'.
Part II, page 105: cacaphony -> cacophony: 'the cacophony of roars'.
Part II, page 106: inserted it: 'what is it, Tharn?'
Part II, page 107: inserted .: 'chattering of many voices.' sinous
-> sinuous: 'long sinuous limb'.
Part II, page 108: thrist -> thirst: 'pangs of thirst'.
Part II, page 109: contructed -> constructed: 'the hut was
constructed'. nut -> hut: 'this hut was practically ringed with
patrolling sentries'. inserted ,: 'once it gave, the structure'.
Part II, page 110: sickenly -> sickeningly: 'hut lurched
sickeningly,'.
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