Part III, page 98: marvelling -> marveling: 'marveling at her
beauty'.
Part III, page 99: forcast -> forecast: 'the storm Tharn had
forecast,'. excitment -> excitement: 'it was the only excitement'.
Part III, page 102: marvelled -> marveled: 'she marveled at how
little'. then -> there: 'Here and there'.
Part III, page 103: an -> any: 'at any moment'.
Part III, page 104: Trakors -> Trakor's: 'in Trakor's heart.'
wariors -> warriors: 'traders, warriors,'.
Part III, page 105: Ammad' to Ammad's: 'Ammad's noblemen'. boundry
-> boundary: 'a boundary dispute'.
Part III, page 106: boundry -> boundary: 'the boundary line'.
Part III, page 108: similiar -> similar: 'a similar distinction,'. '
-> ": 'so easily."' drily -> dryly: 'Curzad commented dryly'.
Part III, page 109: inserted have: 'Tharn would have unhesitatingly
charged'. inpulsive -> impulsive: 'the impulsive act'. coud ->
could: 'he could see'. magnificience -> magnificence: 'greater size
and magnificence,'. worshipping -> worshiping: 'hero-worshiping'.
Part III, page 110: this -> his: 'about his shoulders'.
Part III, page 111: thing -> think: 'think I decided'. I"ll -> I'll:
'Tell him I'll be out'.
Part III, page 112: hestitated -> hesitated: 'He hesitated.' forseen
-> foreseen: 'we had not foreseen,'. speciman -> specimen:
'remarkable physical specimen'.
Part III, page 113: amendable -> amenable: 'make him amenable.'
girls -> girl: 'about a wild girl of the caves?'
Part III, page 114: reconnaisance -> reconnaissance: 'general
reconnaissance'. retract -> retrace: 'retrace his steps'.
Part III, page 116: hand-and -> hand- and: 'hand- and foot-holds'.
threshed -> thrashed: 'thrashed and bucked.'
Part III, page 117: impromtu -> impromptu: 'Dylara's impromptu
club,'.
Part III, page 119: inserted .: 'face the monarch.'
Part III, page 120: inserted - after Whose:
'God-Whose-Name-May-Not-Be-Spoken-Aloud'.
Part III, page 121: beastial -> bestial: 'the bestial snarls'.
Part III, page 122: guage -> gauge: 'chance to gauge'.
Part III, page 123: inserted .: 'heavy with jungle blooms.'
Part III, page 124: . -> ,: '"At once, Most-High."' quited ->
quitted: 'only just quitted.' though -> through: 'to peer through.'
Part III, page 127: it is -> is it: 'Who is it?"'.
Part III, page 128: Sephar -> Ammad: 'sleeping Ammad'.
Part III, page 130: inserted .: 'of the door.' minature ->
miniature: 'the miniature torch'.
Part III, page 131: inserted the: 'at the sound'. occured ->
occurred: 'what had occurred'.
Part III, page 132: than -> that: 'corridor that ran past'. coridor
-> corridor: 'down the corridor a man'. pasing -> passing: 'passing
others quickly.'
Part III, page 133: sizeable -> sizable: 'a sizable group'.
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