I catch, it seems to me, with a certain amount of vision already two or
three, not to say three or four, of my essential hinges or, as I have
called 'em, _clous_, that mark the turns or steps of the action. The
first of these is the appearance on the scene of the second daughter
after things have got well under way in respect to the first. The first
is the fullblown flower--she mustn't be at all too young, by the way;
must be going on to thirty, say--and very little trumpet-blow takes
place about her, on the part of the others, in advance: all pointing to
the fact that she's a sort of neglected quantity--whom nevertheless the
little Horace Walpole man does appreciate and pretend to; under all
encouragement from the others who think him quite _more_ than good
enough for her, though not good enough, no, for the elder sister.
Beware, by the way, of any little false step here: don't make the
pretender in question too too eligible or, in the modern lingo, smart;
since if this were so Ralph wouldn't pass for more desirable. I must
keep him a bit down, in the right sort of way and degree, in comparison
with Ralph; bearing in mind at the same time that a sort of leading note
in it all is his, our's, sense of the hard old class rigour governing
the life about him and of which he sees the salience at every turn. The
reappearance at home of the second girl, from wherever she has been
(expressible in 10 words) at any rate is, as it were, my first clou or
hinge; a fact, an impression, an apprehension, that immediately makes
such a difference for Ralph. I forget already whether I said just above
that the H.W. man talks to him, takes him into his confidence about her,
even to the point of recognising to R. that she doesn't care for his
suit and has much incurred her mother's, sister's and even brother's
reprobation by that attitude. Vividness to R. of the reign of authority
at that time, the much harder rule and discipline; and how half
terrified at what she is doing by hanging back, by resisting, the poor
girl herself is all the while. Her first relation to him is that of her
appealing exactly from this rigour; her first impression of him and
emotion about him, he sees, he gives us to see, is that of a sudden this
fine young American relation is a person who may side with her, may help
her, may intervene and back her up in not accepting addresses from a
person she can't get over her dislike of. Yes, that's their first basis,
and for this appeal Ralph must have been prepared by his own sense of
the kind of uncanny, to put it in a simplified way, little personage her
aspirant is. They come nearer together on that, they meet on that, they
talk, they begin to understand each other on that--very great though
Ralph's responsibility in the matter, the matter of backing up her
refusal, may be. It's at any rate the way the real relation with them,
with him--his sense of the ancient brutality of the others to her, her
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