understanding, with the younger girl, determined for Ralph by his
opening himself to her after the sensation, just above formulated,
proceeding from the rupture and the way the two other women have acted
about it. It's only at this moment, and from this moment, that she
becomes his _confidante_, all the difference being made by that; and
don't I see it as an enormous little fact that whereas he goes on in
silence, as it were, with the others (putting the two men out of the
question, which is a point to be treated separately,) he finds her in no
ignorance, either real or pretended, but welling up, virtually, with
readiness to let him see that she knows. She _knows_--and I think he
doesn't even quite understand why or how she knows; her possession of
what she does know striking him as a matter beyond, in its "quality",
any communication of it that the others may have been capable of making
her. The passage between them representing all this becomes then the
determinant of what I have called the retributive, as distinguished from
the merely warning, reappearance of the other party. I just want to tuck
in here provisionally, and before breaking off for the day, that I hold
tight the "motive", the dramatic value, of the third reappearance; which
resides in my heroine's relation to it--that is not, definitely not, in
her having it at all herself, that is not at all directly, but in her
becoming aware of _his_ having it and, as it were, catching him in the
act of the same. Work this out, express this better, or at least
entirely, in my next go: I perfectly see it--it only wants clear
statement.
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