The Shakespeare-Expositor: An Aid to the Perfect Understanding of Shakespeare's PlaysKeightley, Thomas
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The Shakespeare-Expositor: An Aid to the Perfect Understanding of Shakespeare's Plays
Keightley, Thomas
Drama -- Outlines, syllabi, etc.; Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616 -- Outlines, syllabi, etc.
"Which on more view of many--mine being one,
May stand in number, though in reckoning none" ...
This is the reading of both 4tos and folio, except 4to of 1597, which
reads "_Such amongst_." I should feel inclined to read "Such _as on_
view." By 'more' must be meant more extensive. The aposiopesis, so
suited to the hasty, impetuous character of the speaker, makes all
clear.
* * * * *
"But in that crystal scales, let there be weighed
Your lady's love against some other maid."
This is very oddly expressed; for it was the lady herself, not her
love, that was to be weighed. Theobald proposed _lady-love_; but I
doubt if that phrase was then in use. I read '_lady and love_,' the
& of the MS. having been made s by the printer, as it became _t_ in
'meant' for 'mean _and_' in All's Well, iv. 3.
* * * * *
SC. 4. "Oh! then, I see, Queen Mab has been with you.
_Ben._ Queen Mab! What's she?
_Mer._ She is the fairies' midwife, etc."
I think it best to read thus with 4to, 1597, adding _Mer._ before 'She
is.' Benvolio's question is evidently wanted.
* * * * *
"Of healths five fathom deep."
It seems almost incredible that such a glaring absurdity as this should
have escaped a long succession of critics; and yet I am not aware that
any have noticed it. What is a _health_? a wish, a moral idea, and
how could that be 'five fathom deep'? or be an object of terror to a
soldier? It may be said that it is the cup that is meant, but of this
we have no instance; and even if we had, Master Silence, who was a man
of peace, sings--
"Fill the cup and let it come;
I'll pledge you a mile to the bottóm."
So, as we may see, he was not, and why should a soldier be, afraid
of it? Malone quotes from Westward Hoe, 1607, a passage in which we
have drinking _fathom deep_, and it is apparently drinking healths;
but there is nothing about terror in it, and it seems, no unusual
circumstance, to have arisen from the present line. In fine, something
must have been named that was a real object of terror to a soldier; and
I know no word so likely to have been used as _trenches_, which might
easily have been mistaken for 'healths.' In that case the metric accent
falling on 'five' would augment the terror.
* * * * *
"This is she _that_."
* * * * *
SC. 5. "His son was but a ward two years ago.--
Good youths, i' faith!--Oh! youth's a jolly thing."
The last line is only found in 4to 1597. It is so natural and so
pleasing, that I could not refrain from adopting it.
* * * * *
"It seems she hangs upon the cheek of Night,
Like a rich jewel in an Ethiop's ear."
This is the reading of both 4tos and folio; yet editors have adopted
the far inferior reading of the 2nd folio '_Her beauty_ hangs!' We have
the same idea in
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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