The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 3, February, 1836Various
General
The Southern Literary Messenger, Vol. II., No. 3, February, 1836
Various
American literature -- 19th century -- Periodicals
We perused this sentence more than once before we could fathom its
meaning. Mr. Slidell wishes to say, that _narrowness of forehead in
the rabble is owing to want of mental exercise--they being laborers
not thinkers_. But from the words of our author we are led to conclude
that some occupations (certainly very strange ones) rendered it
unnecessary for those who worked, to administer food to
themselves--that is, to eat. The pronoun "_it_," however, will be
found, upon examination, to refer to "moral culture." The repetition
of the word "only" is also disagreeable, and the entire passage is
overloaded with verbiage. A rigid scrutiny will show that all
essential portions of the intended idea are embodied in the lines
Italicised. In the original sentence are _fifty-four_ words--in our
own _eighteen_--or precisely one third. It follows, that if all the
Lieutenant's sentences had been abridged in a similar manner--a
process which would have redounded greatly to their advantage--we
might have been spared much trouble, and the public much time,
trouble, and expense--the "American in England" making its appearance
in a duodecimo of one hundred and ninety-two pages, rather than in two
octavos of five hundred and seventy-six.
At page 122, vol. I, we have what follows.
"My situation here was uncomfortable enough; if I were softly
cushioned on one side, this only tended, by the contrast, to increase
the obduracy of a small iron rod, which served as a parapet to protect
me from falling off the precipice, over which I hung toppling, and
against which I was forced with a pressure proportioned to the
circumstances of my being compressed into a space somewhat narrower
than myself; the seat having doubtless been contrived to accommodate
five men, and there being no greater anatomical mistake than to
suppose there would be more room because four of them were women."
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