The Sufistic Quatrains of Omar KhayyamOmar Khayyam
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The Sufistic Quatrains of Omar Khayyam
Omar Khayyam
FitzGerald, Edward, 1809-1883; Sufi poetry
Omar is a poet who can hardly be translated satisfactorily otherwise
than in verse. Prose does well enough for narrative or didactic poetry,
where the main things to be reproduced are the matter and substance, but
it is plainly contra-indicated in the case of poetry like Omar's, where
the matter is little else than «the commonplaces of the lyric ode and
the tragic chorus,» and where nearly the whole charm consists in the
style and the manner, the grace of the expression and the melody of the
versification. A literal prose version of such poetry must needs be
unsatisfactory, because it studiously ignores the chief points in which
the attractiveness of the original consists, and deliberately renounces
all attempt to reproduce them.
In deciding on the form to be taken by a new translation of Omar, the
fact of the existence of a previous verse translation of universally
acknowledged merit ought not, of course, to be left out of account. The
successor of a translator like Mr. Fitzgerald, who ventures to write
verse, and especially verse of the metre which he has handled with such
success, cannot help feeling at almost every step that he is provoking
comparisons very much to his own disadvantage. But I do not think this
consideration ought to deter him from using the vehicle which everything
else indicates as the proper one.
As regards metre, there is no doubt that the quatrain of ten-syllable
lines which has been tried by Hammer, Bicknell, and others, and has been
raised by Mr. Fitzgerald almost to the rank of a recognised English
metre, is the best representative of the _Ruba'i_. It fairly satisfies
Conington's canon, viz., that there ought to be some degree of metrical
conformity between the measure of the original and the translation, for
though it does not exactly correspond with the _Ruba'i_, it very
clearly suggests it. In particular, it copies what is perhaps the most
marked feature of the _Ruba'i_,--the interlinking of the four lines by
the repetition in the fourth line of the rhyme of the first and second.
Mr Swinburne's modification of this metre, in which the rhyme is carried
on from one quatrain to the next, is not applicable to poems like
Omar's, all of which are isolated in sense from the context.
Alexandrines would, of course, correspond more nearly than decasyllables
with _Ruba'i_ lines in number of syllables, and they have been
extensively used by Bodenstedt and other German translators of the metre
but, whatever may be the case in German, they are apt to read very
heavily in English, even when constructed by skilful verse-makers, and
an inferior workman can hardly hope to manage them with anything like
success. The shorter length of the decasyllable line is not altogether a
disadvantage to the translator. Owing to the large number of
monosyllables in English, it is generally adequate to hold the contents
of a Persian line a syllable or two longer; and a line erring, if at
Public-domain text, read in full here on John Shaqi.
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