The Sufistic Quatrains of Omar KhayyamOmar Khayyam
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The Sufistic Quatrains of Omar Khayyam
Omar Khayyam
FitzGerald, Edward, 1809-1883; Sufi poetry
all, on the side of brevity, has at any rate the advantage of obliging
the translator to eschew modern diffuseness, and of making him try to
copy the «classical parsimony,» the archaic terseness and condensation
of the original.
The poet Cowper has a remark on translation from Latin which is
eminently true also of translation from Persian. He says, «That is
epigrammatic and witty in Latin which would be perfectly insipid in
English.... If a Latin poem is neat, elegant, and musical, it is enough,
but English readers are not so easily satisfied.» Much of Omar's matter,
when literally translated, seems very trite and commonplace, many of the
«conceits,» of which he is so fond, very frigid, and even his peculiar
grotesque humour often loses its savour in an English _replica_. The
translator is often tempted to elevate a too grovelling sentiment, to
«sharpen a point» here and there, to trick out a commonplace with some
borrowed modern embellishment. But this temptation is one to be resisted
as far as possible. According to the _Hadis_, «The business of a
messenger is simply to deliver his message,» and he must not shrink from
displaying the naked truth. A translator who writes in verse must of
course claim the liberty of altering the form of the expression over and
over again, but the substituted expressions ought to be in keeping with
the author's style, and on the same plane of sentiment as his. It is
beyond the province of a translator to attempt the task of «painting the
lily.» But it is easier to lay down correct principles of translation
than to observe them unswervingly in one's practice.
As regards subject matter, Omar's quatrains may be classed under the
following six heads:--
I. _Shikayat i rozgar_--Complaints of «the wheel of heaven,» or fate, of
the world's injustice, of the loss of friends, of man's limited
faculties and destinies.
II. _Hajw_--Satires on the hypocrisy of the «unco' guid,» the impiety of
the pious, the ignorance of the learned, and the untowardness of his own
generation.
III. _Firakiya_ and _Wisaliya_--Love-poems on the sorrows of separation
and the joys of reunion with the Beloved, earthly or spiritual.
IV. _Bahariya_--Poems in praise of spring, gardens, and flowers.
V. _Kufriya_--Irreligious and antinomian utterances, charging the sins
of the creature to the account of the Creator, scoffing at the Prophet's
Paradise and Hell, singing the praises of wine and pleasure--preaching
_ad nauseam_, «eat and drink (especially drink), for to-morrow ye die.»
VI. _Munajat_--Addresses to the Deity, now in the ordinary language of
devotion, bewailing sins and imploring pardon, now in Mystic
phraseology, craving deliverance from «self,» and union with the «Truth»
(_Al Hakk_), or Deity, as conceived by the Mystics.
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