William Shakespeare: A Critical StudyBrandes, Georg
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William Shakespeare: A Critical Study
Brandes, Georg
Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616 -- Criticism and interpretation
The conduct of the poem presents a series of opportunities and
pretexts for voluptuous situations and descriptions. The ineffectual
blandishments lavished by Venus on the chaste and frigid youth, who,
in his sheer boyishness, is as irresponsive as a bashful woman--her
kisses, caresses, and embraces, are depicted in detail. It is as
though a Titian or Rubens had painted a model in a whole series of
tender situations, now in one attitude, now in another. Then comes the
suggestive scene in which Adonis's horse breaks away in order to meet
the challenge of a mare which happens to wander by, together with the
goddess's comments thereupon. Then new advances and solicitations,
almost inadmissibly daring, according to the taste of our day.
An element of feeling is introduced in the portrayal of Venus's anguish
when Adonis expresses his intention of hunting the boar. But it is to
sheer description that the poet chiefly devotes himself--description of
the charging boar, description of the fair young body bathed in blood,
and so forth. There is a fire and rapture of colour in it all, as in a
picture by some Italian master of a hundred years before.
Quite unmistakable is the insinuating, luscious, almost saccharine
quality of the writing, which accounts for the fact that, when his
immediate contemporaries speak of Shakespeare's diction, honey is the
similitude that first suggests itself to them. John Weever, in 1595,
calls him "honey-tongued," and in 1598 Francis Meres uses the same
term, with the addition of "mellifluous."
There is, indeed, an extraordinary sweetness in these strophes.
Tenderness, every
here and there, finds really entrancing utterance. When Adonis has for
the first time harshly repulsed Venus, in a speech of some length:--
"'What! canst thou talk?' quoth she, 'hast thou a tongue?
O, would thou hadst not, or I had no hearing!
Thy mermaid's voice hath done me double wrong;
I had my load before, now press'd with bearing:
Melodious discord, heavenly tune harsh-sounding,
Ear's deep-sweet music, and heart's deep-sore wounding,'"
But the style also exhibits numberless instances of tasteless Italian
artificiality. Breathing the "heavenly moisture" of Adonis's breath, she
"Wishes her cheeks were gardens full of flowers,
So they were dew'd with such distilling showers."
Of Adonis's dimples it is said:--
"These lovely caves, these round enchanting pits,
Open'd their mouths to swallow Venus' liking."
"My love to love," says Adonis, "is love but to disgrace it." Venus
enumerates the delights he would afford to each of her senses
separately, supposing her deprived of all the rest, and concludes
thus:--
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