Sunday 17th.--... We thus find ourselves docked of the two poems
on which we had to rely for Nos. 3 and 4. However, as there was no
help for it, we set to thinking how to manage with this deficiency.
The first thing thought of was Gabriel’s _Dante in Exile_, but
this he is unwilling to have printed until he shall have been able
to give it full consideration as a whole--besides its connexion
with his translation of the _Vita Nuova_, separated from which,
he thinks some allusions in the poem scarcely intelligible. His
_Jane’s Portrait_[213] was then discussed. This however is too much
like Woolner’s _My Lady in Death_ as regards subject; nor does
Gabriel think it good enough as a specimen of his powers. The last
suggestion was that Woolner should look up that part of his old
poem of _Hubert_,[214] which describes the lovers’ meeting, and see
whether it can be got into shape as complete in itself....
Monday 18th.--In default of any adequate poem, I looked up my
sister’s old thing, named _An Argument_,[215] which is at least long
enough and in a narrative form. Tupper, to whom I read it, is very
much delighted with it; but the fact is, it is not quite up to the
mark.
Tuesday 19th.--... Gabriel, coming home from Brown’s, told me he had
there met Robert Dickinson, who has undertaken the publication of
_The Germ_. This is the best thing that could have happened for it
perhaps.
Wednesday 20th.--Patmore sent me his paper on Macbeth; which is
devoted to showing that the idea of obtaining the crown was not
suggested to Macbeth by the Witches, but had been previously
contemplated by him. It is very acute and well written, and will fill
some twenty pages. Our difficulties as to illustrations continue.
The only plans we have thought of are either to make an etching for
our sister’s poem in two compartments--one of the girl spinning,
and the other of the battlefield, or (as Tupper thinks preferable)
of the avalanche; or else to take some subject from Gabriel’s _Hand
and Soul_ in the first No. Tupper decided to call on Gabriel at his
study, to talk this over; but it so happened that Gabriel stopped at
home, touching-up his _Dante in Exile_.