O pang-dowered Poet, whose reverberant lips
And heart-strung lyre awoke the moon’s eclipse,--
Thou whom the daisies glory in growing o’er,--
Their fragrance clings around thy name, not writ,
But rumour’d in water, while the fame of it
Along Time’s flood goes echoing evermore.
I need hardly say that this sonnet seemed to me extremely noble in
sentiment, and in music a glorious volume of sound. I felt, however,
that it would be urged against it that it did not strike the keynote of
the genius of Keats; that it would be said that in all the particulars
in which Rossetti had truthfully and pathetically described London,
Keats was in rather than of it; and that it would be affirmed that Keats
lived in a fairy world of his own inventing, caring little for the storm
and stress of London life. On the other hand, I knew it could be replied
that Keats was not indifferent to the misery of city life; that it bore
heavily upon him; that it came out powerfully and very sadly in his _Ode
to the Nightingale_, and that it may have been from sheer torture in
the contemplation of it that he fled away to a poetic world of his own
creating. Moreover, Rossetti’s sonnet touched the life, rather than
the genius, of Keats, and of this it struck the keynote in the opening
lines. I ventured to think that the second and third lines wanted a
little clarifying in the relation in which they stood. They seemed to
be a sudden focussing of the laughter and weeping previously mentioned,
rather than, what they were meant to be, a natural and necessary
equipoise showing the inner life of Keats as contrasted with his outer
life. To such an objection as this, Rossetti said:
I am rather aghast for my own lucidity when I read what you
say as to the first quatrain of my Keats sonnet. However, I
always take these misconceptions as warnings to the Muse,
and may probably alter the opening as below:
The weltering London ways where children weep
And girls whom none call maidens laugh,--strange road,
Miring his outward steps who inly trode
The bright Castalian brink and Latinos’ steep:--
Even such his life’s cross-paths: till deathly deep
He toiled through sands of Lethe, etc.
I ‘ll say more anent Keats anon.