By-the-bye [he says], I cannot understand what you say of
Milton’s, Keats’s, and Coleridge’s sonnets. The last, it is
true, was _always_ poor as a sonnetteer (I don’t see much in
the _Autumnal Moon_). My own only exception to this verdict
(much as I adore Coleridge’s genius) would be the ludicrous
sonnet on _The House that Jack built_, which is a
masterpiece in its way. I should not myself number the one
you mention of Keats’s among his best half-dozen (many of
his are mere drafts, strange to say); and cannot at all
enter into your verdict on those of Milton, which seem to me
to be every one of exceptional excellence, though a few are
even finer than the rest, notably, of course, the one you
name. Pardon an egotistic sentence (in answer to what you
say so generously of _Lost Days_), if I express an opinion
that _Known in Vain_ and _Still-born Love_ may perhaps be
said to head the series in value, though _Lost Days_ might
be equally a favourite with me if I did not remember in what
but too opportune juncture it was wrung out of me. I have a
good number of sonnets for _The House of Life_ still in MS.,
which I have worked on with my best effort, and, I think,
will fully sustain their place. These and other things I
should like to show you whenever we meet again. The MS. vol.
I proposed to send is merely an old set of (chiefly)
trifles, about which I should like an opinion as to whether
any should be included in the future.
I had spoken of Keats’s sonnet beginning
To one who has been long in city pent,
with its exquisite last lines--
E’en like the passage of an angel’s tear
That falls through the clear ether silently,
reminding one of a less spiritual figure--
Kings like a golden jewel
Down a golden stair.
After his bantering me, as of old he had done, on the use of long and
crabbed words, I hinted that he was in honour bound to agree at least
with my disparaging judgment upon _Tetrachordon_, if only because of the
use of words that would “have made Quintillian stare.”
I further instanced--
“Harry whose tuneful and well-measured song;” and
“Lawrence, of virtuous father virtuous son,”
as examples of Milton at his weakest as a sonnet-writer. He replied: