Practical English Composition: Book II.: For the Second Year of the High School
John Stuart Mill · en
An advertisement must be clear, not only in language and construction,
but in mechanical structure as well. Attention-lines and command-lines
must be short and set up so as to stand out clearly from the body of the
advertisement. The eye takes in automatically from four to six words at
a glance, setting the natural limit of length for strong features in an
advertisement. Artistic arrangement helps an advertisement because
carefully balanced matter is more attractive than inartistic
combinations. A well-balanced advertisement, an advertisement in which
the points are properly subordinated, conveys its meaning to the reader
more easily than a badly distributed statement of the same arguments. In
the last analysis good art is little more than good order, order that is
pleasing to the eye as well as the mind. Good order requires a
distribution of eye-effects that coincides with the distribution of mind
effects.
VII. Assignment IV
Measure ten particularly attractive advertisements, illustrated or
otherwise. Find the line on which the attention is focused and measure
its distance from the top and bottom. Test these distances by the
formulæ:
A +-------------+ B
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C |-------------| D
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E +-------------+ F
(a) AB = 1 inch.
AC = .62 inch.
AE = 1.62 inches.
(b) AE : AB :: AE + AB : AE
1.62 : 1 :: 2.62 : 1.62
(c) CD : AC :: CD + AC : AD
1 : .62 :: 1.62 : 1
This is the so-called "golden rectangle," the most pleasing of all
rectangular forms. The attention-line CD is at the point that makes the
upper section a "golden rectangle." The capital letter "H" is also one
of the most common arrangements in advertising. The square is another
pleasing figure and there are many other forms in which advertising
matter may be balanced.
VIII. Brevity
Advertising occupies space for which a high rate frequently is paid.
Brief statement is therefore a factor of great importance. If a small
space is all that is available, the problem of attracting attention
becomes most important. It should be evident that a few words clearly
and plainly printed are far more effective in a small space than a long
message that is in such fine print that it will strain the eyes of the
reader. In the one case you say something at least to your reader. In
the other, you have no chance to say anything because you have tried to
say too much. When it is necessary to confine your message to a small
space, the attention-sentence, or in some cases the command-sentence, is
the part to use. Many signs seen from the rapidly moving window of a
street-car or railroad train carry only the name of the product
attractively displayed, with a command to use it.
IX. Assignment V