(_Note_.—At this point in Harley’s manuscript there is evidence of
indecision on the author’s part. His heroine had begun to bother him a
trifle. He had written a half-dozen lines descriptive of Miss Andrews’s
emotions at receiving a special note of invitation, subsequently erasing
them. The word “gleefully” had been scratched out, and then restored in
place of “scornfully,” which had at first been substituted for it. It
was plain that Harley was not quite certain as to how much a woman of
Miss Andrews’s type would care for a special attention of this nature,
even if she cared for it at all. As a matter of fact, the word chosen
should have been “dubiously,” and neither “gleefully” nor “scornfully”;
for the real truth was that there was no reason why Mrs. Howlett should
so honor Marguerite, and the girl at once began to wonder if it were not
an extra precaution of Harley’s to assure her presence at the ball for
the benefit of himself and his publishers. The author finally wrote it
as I have given it above, however, and Miss Andrews received her special
invitation “gleefully”—according to Harley. He perceives her doubt,
however, without comprehending it; for after describing Mrs. Willard’s
reading of the note, he goes on.)
“That is very nice of Mrs. Howlett,” said Mrs. Willard, handing
Marguerite back her note. “It is a special honor, my dear, by which you
should feel highly flattered. She doesn’t often do things like that.”
“I should think not,” said Marguerite. “I am a perfect stranger to her,
and that she should do it at all strikes me as being most extraordinary.
It doesn’t seem sincere, and I can’t help thinking that some extraneous
circumstance has been brought to bear upon her to force her to do it.”
(_Note_.—Stuart Harley has commented upon this as follows: “As I read
this over I must admit that Miss Andrews was right. Why I had Mrs.
Howlett do such a thing I don’t know, unless it was that my own
admiration for my heroine led me to believe that some more than usual
attention was her due. In my own behalf I will say that I should in all
probability have eliminated or corrected this false note when I came to
the revision of my proofs.” The chapter then proceeds.)
“What shall we wear?” mused Mrs. Willard, as Marguerite folded Mrs.
Howlett’s note and replaced it in its envelope.
“I must positively decline to discuss that question. It is of no public
interest,” snapped Marguerite, her face flushing angrily. “My clothing
is my own business, and no one’s else.” She paused a moment, and then,
in an apologetic tone, she added, “I’d be perfectly willing to talk with
you about it generally, my dear Dorothy, but not now.”
Mrs. Willard looked at the girl in surprise.
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