Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
Here again no strict connection can be construed. That the section
opens in this strain is probably due to a reaction against the prosy
scientific language he used in the previous section. Casting about for
a more elegiac tone, the poet is naturally brought back to Milton’s
_Lycidas_, from which he borrows the image of the setting sun,
emblem of his dead friend. It is all very well to be able to account
for Tennyson in this way. It does not, however, justify his binding
together of random leaves from his poetic notebook into a long
poem. The division into sections has certainly done away with the
padding that would have been necessary had the poem been treated as a
continuous piece without breaks. But it does not conceal the fact that
these sections have no logical connection with one another. Deprive the
poem of its sectional division; deprive it of its metrical regularity;
and it will appear the loose and ill-assorted bundle of lost ideas
it really is. Such feeble and false material would certainly not be
tolerated in a poem which, like _The Waste Land_, had to invent
its metrical changes as it went along. It is especially in the long
poem that the distinction between form and subject-matter has the most
vicious effect. In a short poem, even if form and subject-matter are
not made identical, it is possible to keep them proper to each other:
as in Milton’s _L’Allegro_. Compare this with its companion piece
_Il Penseroso_, which is a praise of pensive melancholy as the
former is a light-hearted denial of melancholy; and the metre will be
found to be identical, though it is used with a different effect in
both.
But come thou Goddes fair and free,
In Heav’n ycleap’d Euphrosyne,
And by men, heart-easing Mirth,
Whom lovely Venus, at a birth
With two sister Graces more
To Ivy-crownèd Bacchus bore;
is exactly the same metre as:
But hail thou Goddes, sage and holy,
Hail divinest Melancholy,
Whose saintly visage is too bright
To hit the sense of human sight;
And therefore to our weaker view,
Ore laid with black staid Wisdom’s hew.
But in the first all is hurried, little punctuation is used; in the
second all is slowed down, there is comparatively more punctuation,
we get heavy internal rhymes, such as _Ore laid_ with _black
staid_, and the rhythm is further delayed by _s’s_ used in
close juxtaposition, as _Goddes_, _sage_, _Whose saintly
visage_, etc. Neither the tripping movement nor the slow-pacing
movement, however, could have been effectively kept up if the poems had
been any longer. Certainly if they had been printed together as the two
halves of a single poem, the contrastive use of the metre would have
not been so striking, a greater uniformity would have been necessary.
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