Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
This is the beginning of one of Mr. Cummings’ poems. The first obvious
oddity is the degrading of the personal pronoun ‘I’ into ‘i’. This has
a very simple history. The ‘upper case’ was in mediaeval times used for
all nouns and proper names and the adjectives formed from them; for
the Deity; for Royalty (in ‘We’ and ‘Our’); for certain quasi-divine
abstractions such as Mystery, Power, Poetry; and sometimes for ‘She’
and ‘Thou’ and so on, where love gives the pronoun a quasi-divine
character. Mr. Cummings protests against the upper case being also
allotted to ‘I’: he affects a casualness, a humility, a denial of
the idea of personal immortality responsible for ‘I’. Moreover ‘i’
is more detached: it dissociates the author from the speaker of the
poem. This use of ‘i’ is in keeping with his use of the word ‘who’,
instead of ‘which’, to qualify the roses; the roses become so personal
as to deserve the personal rather than the neutral relative. His next
idiosyncrasy is his refusal of a capital letter to each new line of
the poem. Now, if this convention were not so ancient, it would
seem as odd and unnecessary as, for instance, quotation-marks seem
in eighteenth-century books enclosing each line of a long speech
instead of occurring only at the beginning and end of a passage. The
modernist rejection of the initial capital can be justified on the
grounds that it gives the first word of each line, which may be a
mere ‘and’ or ‘or’, an unnatural emphasis. If for special reasons the
poet wishes to capitalize the first word, the fact that it is anyhow
capitalized like all the other initial ‘And’s’ and ‘Or’s’ makes any
such niceness impossible. Later in the poem Cummings uses the capital
letter at the beginning of a new sentence to call attention to the
full-stop which might otherwise be missed: but the ‘because’ at the
beginning of the poem need not be capitalized because it obviously
_is_ the beginning. Similarly, he has suppressed the conventional
comma after ‘lady’ because the end of the line makes a natural pause
without punctuation. Commas he uses to mark pauses, not merely as
the geographical boundaries of a clause. He has even in another poem
inserted one between the ‘n’ and ‘g’ of the word ‘falling’ to suggest
the slowness of the falling. Colons and semicolons and full stops he
uses to mark pauses of varying length. To give a longer pause still
he will leave a blank line. In the quotation just given, the new line
at ‘remembering’ is to mark a change of tone, though the pause is not
longer than a semicolon’s worth. Parentheses he uses for _sotto
voce_ pronunciation; or, if they occur in the middle of the word, as
in “the taxi-man p(ee)ps his whistle”, they denote a certain quality
of the letters enclosed--here the actual sharp whistling sound between
the opening and closing (the two p’s) of the taxi-man’s lips. When this
system is carried to a point of great accuracy we find lines like the
following:
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