Free verse; Modernism (Literature); Poetry, Modern -- 20th century -- History and criticism
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which, quoted detached from their context, seem to support any charge
of irrational freakishness, but in their context are completely
intelligible. Moreover, Mr. Cummings is protecting himself against
future liberties which printers and editors may take with his work, by
using a personal typographical system which it will be impossible to
revise without destroying the poem.
It may be that he has learned a lesson from the fate that has overtaken
Shakespeare’s sonnets: in which not only have changes in spelling
and pronunciation been used to justify the liberties that have been
taken in ‘modernizing’ the texts; but certain very occasional and
obvious printer’s errors in the only edition printed in Shakespeare’s
lifetime have been made the excuse for hundreds of quite unjustifiable
emendations. Mr. Cummings and Shakespeare have in common a deadly
accuracy, and that accuracy makes poems difficult rather than easy.
It is this accuracy that frightens Mr. Cummings’ public, it was
Shakespeare’s accuracy that provoked his editors to meddle with his
texts as being too incomprehensible as they were written. Actually we
shall find that Shakespeare is more difficult than Mr. Cummings in
thought, though his poems have a more familiar look on the page: Mr.
Cummings expresses with an accuracy peculiar to him what is common to
everyone, Shakespeare expresses in the conventional form of the time,
with greater accuracy, what is peculiar to himself. Let us print two
versions of a sonnet by Shakespeare, first the version found in the
_Oxford Book of English Verse_ and other popular anthologies
which have apparently chosen this sonnet from all the others as
being particularly easy to understand, and next the version printed
in the 1609 edition of the Sonnets, and apparently, though pirated,
printed from Shakespeare’s original manuscript. The alterations, it
will be noticed in a comparison of the first with the second, are,
with a few exceptions which we will point out later, chiefly in the
punctuation and spelling. By showing what great difference in the sense
the juggling of punctuation marks has made in Shakespeare’s original
sonnet, we shall perhaps be able to sympathize somewhat with what seems
typographical perversity in a poet like Mr. Cummings. The modernizing
of the spelling is not quite so serious a matter, though we shall see
that to change a word like _blouddy_ to _bloody_ makes a
difference not only in the atmosphere of the word but in its sound as
well.
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