Louisiana -- Social life and customs -- Fiction; Short stories, American
Little more than twelve years ago, before the "Texas and Pacific" had
joined the cities of New Orleans and Shreveport with its steel bands,
it was a common thing to travel through miles of central Louisiana in
a buggy. Fred Bartner, a young commission merchant of New Orleans,
on business bent, had made the trip in this way by easy stages from
his home to a point on Cane River, within a half day's journey of
Natchitoches. From the mouth of Cane River he had passed one plantation
after another,--large ones and small ones. There was nowhere sight
of anything like a town, except the little hamlet of Cloutierville,
through which they had sped in the gray dawn. "Dat town, hit's ole,
ole; mos' a hund'ed year' ole, dey say. Uh, uh, look to me like it heap
ol'r an' dat," the darkey had commented. Now they were within sight of
Monsieur Jean Ba's towering Cherokee hedge.
It was Christmas morning, but the sun was warm and the air so soft and
mild that Bartner found the most comfortable way to wear his light
overcoat was across his knees. At the entrance to the plantation he
dismounted and the negro drove away toward the smithy which stood on
the edge of the field.
From the end of the long avenue of magnolias that led to it, the house
which confronted Bartner looked grotesquely long in comparison with its
height. It was one story, of pale, yellow stucco; its massive wooden
shutters were a faded green. A wide gallery, topped by the overhanging
roof, encircled it.
At the head of the stairs a very old man stood. His figure was small
and shrunken, his hair long and snow-white. He wore a broad, soft
felt hat, and a brown plaid shawl across his bent shoulders. A tall,
graceful girl stood beside him; she was clad in a warm-colored blue
stuff gown. She seemed to be expostulating with the old gentleman,
who evidently wanted to descend the stairs to meet the approaching
visitor. Before Bartner had had time to do more than lift his hat,
Monsieur Jean Ba had thrown his trembling arms about the young man and
was exclaiming in his quavering old tones: "À la fin! mon fils! à la
fin!" Tears started to the girl's eyes and she was rosy with confusion.
"Oh, escuse him, sir; please escuse him," she whisperingly entreated,
gently striving to disengage the old gentleman's arms from around
the astonished Bartner. But a new line of thought seemed fortunately
to take possession of Monsieur Jean Ba, for he moved away and went
quickly, pattering like a baby, down the gallery. His fleecy white hair
streamed out on the soft breeze, and his brown shawl flapped as he
turned the corner.
Bartner, left alone with the girl, proceeded to introduce himself and
to explain his presence there.
"Oh! Mr. Fred Bartna of New Orleans? The commission merchant!" she
exclaimed, cordially extending her hand. "So well known in Natchitoches
parish. Not _our_ merchant, Mr. Bartna," she added, naively, "but jus'
as welcome, all the same, at my gran'father's."
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