Biblical Revision: considerations in favour of a revised translation of Holy ScriptureSlater, Edward
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Biblical Revision: considerations in favour of a revised translation of Holy Scripture
Slater, Edward
Bible -- Translating; Bible -- Versions
Therefore will I divide him 12. Therefore I will allot him
_a portion_ with the great, and the great for his portion, and he
he shall divide the spoil with shall divide the mighty as spoil,
the strong; because he poured out because he poured out his soul
his soul unto death: and he was unto death, and was numbered with
numbered with the transgressors; transgressors. So he bore the
and he bare the sin of many, and sin of many, and intercedes {18b}
made intercession for the for the transgressors.
transgressors.
NOTE.—The new translation is less soft and mellifluous than the old, but
let it not be hastily condemned in the comparison on that account. It is
more exact, and that is the principal object now. Probably it may yet
fall into hands that shall combine all the beautiful flow of the old
version, with no less, and even far greater exactness than we have been
able to achieve.
Thus far for the Old Testament. We adopt a somewhat different mode of
selection in dealing with the New, but adhere to our plan of exhibiting
the two versions in juxtaposition. The amended passages that follow are
taken, with a few exceptions, from Professor Scholefield’s “Hints for an
Improved Translation of the New Testament.” They are, it is presumed,
sufficiently important to warrant the selection, but it must be premised
that it is not by taking isolated passages for emendation that the WHOLE
TRUTH insisted upon in these pages can be enforced. There are numberless
points of correction of which our version is susceptible that are not
adapted for such isolated exhibition, and which it is the special
business of the Greek particles to supply; but the exhibition of such
points, involving the structure of sentences and the mutual relation of
the clauses of which they are made up, would require a much larger
canvass. We indicate this source of correction only to avert the
conclusion, that our argument rests solely on the basis supplied in the
particular mode of illustration adopted.
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