Coleridge's Ancient Mariner and Select PoemsColeridge, Samuel Taylor
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Coleridge's Ancient Mariner and Select Poems
Coleridge, Samuel Taylor
English poetry
Much of the archaic diction and antique spelling, as well as the ruder
grotesquerie, that in the first edition proclaimed its relation to the
pseudo-balladry of the time disappeared in the later editions. But the
archaisms, the "unpoetical" diction, and especially the disregard of
tense coherence in the poem as we now have it, contribute greatly to the
atmosphere of romance--as of a story removed alike from the commonplace
experience of every day and from familiar literary conventions--which it
was Coleridge's intention to produce. By a few devotional
ejaculations--"Heaven's Mother send us grace!" "To Mary Queen the praise
be given!"--we are made to feel that the Ancient Mariner lived before
the Reformation, in the ages of wonder and faith. Repetition, as in many
stanzas of Part IV., is a device caught from the folk-ballad and
modified to produce the effect of a spell, which is so strong a mark of
the poem. The abrupt opening, the unannounced transitions in dialogue,
the omission of all but the vital incidents of the story, all belong to
the ballad style. The verse form is what is known as the ballad stanza
(stanza of four lines--a line of four accents followed by one of three,
the second and fourth lines riming) variously extended and modified to
suit the mood of the passage. The prose summary in the form of a
marginal gloss, first added in the edition of 1817, is a practice taken
from early printed books, but not from balladry, which is normally oral.
Of the literary qualities of the poem much might be said, but I call
attention here to but two: the organic structure of the story and the
character of the imagery, two important aspects of creative imagination.
The seven parts are seven stages of the narrative, each, except the
last, closing with a reference to the Mariner's sin. The story proceeds
like the successive acts of a play. In Part I. the deed is committed; in
Part II. the punishment begins; in Part III. the punishment reaches its
climax. Part IV. brings the "turn"; in the crisis of his sufferings
comes the consciousness of fellowship with other creatures and
repentance for his cruelty. Parts V. and VI. relate his penance begun,
and his return by supernatural agencies to the world of human
fellowship; and Part VII. brings us back to the opening scene, closing
the whole with a moral. The moral is so plainly set forth that one
wonders how Mrs. Barbauld could ever have complained, as Coleridge tells
us she did, that the poem "had no moral." His reply is worth recording:
"I told her that in my opinion the poem had too much; and that the only,
or chief fault, if I might say so, was the obtrusion of the moral
sentiment so openly on the reader as a principle or cause of action in a
work of such pure imagination. It ought to have had no more moral than
the Arabian Nights' tale of the merchant's sitting down to eat dates by
the side of a well, and throwing the shells aside, and lo! a genie
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