Cyrano de Bergerac: An Heroic Comedy in Five Acts — John Shaqi
Cyrano de Bergerac: An Heroic Comedy in Five ActsRostand, Edmond
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Cyrano de Bergerac: An Heroic Comedy in Five Acts
Rostand, Edmond
Authors, French -- 17th century -- Drama; Cyrano de Bergerac, 1619-1655 -- Drama; France -- History -- 17th century -- Drama
Natural, unconstrained verse can, with proper care, it is thought, be
written in English, and can certainly, with appropriate training, be
delivered with naturalness. This done, our audiences would no doubt take
kindly to the rhythm of plays in verse. But, as this does not yet seem
to have been fully accomplished, the undersigned translator of "Cyrano
de Bergerac" reluctantly decided to use both verse and prose. For this
liberty, though justified as above, he feels that he owes the French
poet an apology, adding, however, that the deed brought its own
punishment, since, strange as it may appear to some, it would have been
much easier to render the play all in verse.
As to verse and metrics, on which, in this instance, a book could (and
later, may) be written, the author of this translation must now rest
satisfied with the following brief remarks.
Enlightened by considerable experience, the result of many experiments
and after much thought, he adopted blank pentameter as the true
equivalent in English of French riming Alexandrine verse. First, because
in English, frequent elisions making many syllables heavy, and "run on"
lines practically adding to the number of syllables, the ten-syllable
line of English verse is in reality the counterpart of the
twelve-syllable verse in French. And second, because the object of rime
being, not to repeat a given sound, but to _beat time_, the strongly
accentuated syllables of English, as compared with the very much more
even enunciation of French, are quite sufficient, without rime or
assonance, to _mark rhythm_. Thus he avoided at least one criticism, to
wit: rime is monotonous!
Touching metrics, the writer will here go only one step in the ways of
heresy, by stating that, in his opinion, such words as "our," "hour,"
"fire," etc., should be, as in French, "duel," "hier," etc., counted for
one syllable, or for two syllables, according to rhythm as influenced
by the stronger or weaker emphasis called for by the _sense_ of the
word. This could be elucidated by examples, the place of which, however,
is not here.
More generally as to methods, the writer makes free to state that,
exerting himself to avoid _literal_ translation (too often productive of
laughable nonsense), and _free_ translation (frequently a substitution
of the translator's for the author's thoughts), he endeavoured, as in
previous works of the same nature, to give what he has termed an
_equivalent_ translation. In other words, he strove to remain really
true to the original by creating in detail, as well as in a general way,
in English words on English minds the _impression_ caused by French
words on French minds. Some examples of the _equivalence_ at least
sought for will be found in the foot-notes on several pages of this
book.
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