Elements of Criticism, Volume II.Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Philosophy
Elements of Criticism, Volume II.
Kames, Henry Home, Lord
Criticism; Literary style
This arrangement leads to a wrong sense: The adverb _merely_ seems by
its position to affect the preceding word; whereas it is intended to
affect the following words _an ordinary presence_; and therefore the
arrangement ought to be thus.
How much the imagination of such a presence must exalt a genius, we
may observe from the influence which an ordinary presence merely
has over men.
The time of the election of a poet-laureat being now at hand, it
may be proper to give some account of the rites and ceremonies
anciently used at that solemnity, and only discontinued through the
neglect and degeneracy of later times.
_Guardian._
The term _only_ is intended to qualify the noun _degeneracy_, and not
the participle _discontinued_; and therefore the arrangement ought to be
as follows.
---- and discontinued through the neglect
and degeneracy only, of later times.
Sixtus the Fourth was, if I mistake not, a great collector of books
at least.
_Letters on history, vol. 1. let. 6._ _Bolingbroke._
The expression here leads evidently to a wrong sense. The adverb _at
least_, ought not to be connected with the substantive _books_, but with
_collector_, thus:
Sixtus the Fourth was a great collector at least, of books.
Speaking of Lewis XIV.
If he was not the greatest king, he was the best actor of majesty
at least, that ever filled a throne.
_Ibid. letter 7._
Better thus:
If he was not the greatest king, he was at least the best actor of
majesty, _&c._
This arrangement removes the wrong sense occasioned by the juxtaposition
of _majesty_ and _at least_.
The following examples are of the wrong arrangement of members.
I have confined myself to those methods for the advancement of
piety, which are in the power of a prince limited like ours by a
strict execution of the laws.
_A project for the advancement of religion._ _Swift._
The structure of this period leads to a meaning which is not the
author’s, _viz._ power limited by a strict execution of the laws. This
wrong sense is removed by the following arrangement.
I have confined myself to those methods for the advancement of
piety, which, by a strict execution of the laws, are in the power
of a prince limited like ours.
This morning when one of Lady Lizard’s daughters was looking over
some hoods and ribands brought by her tirewoman, with great care
and diligence, I employed no less in examining the box which
contained them.
_Guardian_, Nº 4.
The wrong sense occasioned by this arrangement, may be easily prevented
by varying it thus:
This morning when, with great care and diligence, one of Lady
Lizard’s daughters was looking over some hoods and ribands, _&c._
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