Germans generally, who, from the close intercourse I have always
maintained with that people, are inclined to look on my doings in
the field of their literature with a specially favourable eye. Under
these circumstances, it was only natural for me to imagine that the
condemnation I had passed on my first juvenile attempt in verse had
perhaps been too severe; and that, after all, I owed it to myself,
and to Goethe, and to the noble people with whom I had been from my
youth so intimately connected, to give my translation a thorough
revisal, and to republish it in a form which might be as worthy of
the ambition that such an attempt implied as my literary capability
admitted. I accordingly, some four or five years ago, employed the
leisure of the summer months in correcting, and in not a few places
carefully rewriting, the whole work in the shape in which it now
appears.
The principal fault which led me to condemn so severely my early
work was a certain deficiency in the easy natural grace, which every
one who knows the great German poet must recognise as one of the
most attractive characteristics of his composition. This deficiency
arose in my case partly from want of experience in the dexterous use
of poetical expression, partly from the habit of clinging too
closely to the words of the original, which is the natural vice of a
young and conscientious translator. Long practice in such matters
has now convinced me that a literal version of a great poem never
can be a graceful version; and poetry without grace is like painting
without colour, or preaching without faith; it lacks the very
feature which makes it what it pretends to be, and gives it a right
to exist. Those who wish to be minutely curious about the _ipsissima
verba_ of a great poem should read a prose translation; the mere
want of the rhythmical movement never can deprive the work of its
ideal character and elevating influence; and in the case of Faust
this has been amply proved by the excellent translation of Mr.
Hayward, which, I believe, has now reached a twelfth edition. But
the problem of the poetical translator is to give, not the words,
but the character of the original; to transfer its spirit, its tone,
its salient features, and its rhythmical attitude, into another
tongue, so far as the capabilities of that other tongue render such
a transference possible. This is the principle on which I have
worked. It would have been easy for me to have made many passages
more literal; but, in doing so, I should have sacrificed the freedom
of handling, without which I am convinced that graceful ease and
naturalness in rhythmical composition is impossible.
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