(5) In translating, try to bring out the exact force of the +Ablative
Absolute+, by which a Latin writer shows the time or circumstances of
the action expressed by the Predicate. The Ablative Absolute is an
adverbial enlargement of the Predicate, and is not grammatically
dependent on any word in the sentence. It is, therefore, called
+absolutus+ (i.e. _freed from_ or _unconnected_). It should very seldom
be translated literally. Your best plan will be to consider carefully
what the Ablative Absolute seems to suggest about the action of the
Principal Verb.
For example:--
+Capta Troia, Graeci domum redierunt.+
_The Greeks returned home after the capture of Troy._
+Regnante Romulo, Roma urbs erat parva.+
_When Romulus was reigning, Rome was a small city._
+Exercitu collecto in hostes contenderunt.+
_They collected an army and marched against the enemy._
+Nondum hieme confecta in fines Nerviorum contendit.+
_Though the winter was not yet over, he hastened to the territory
of the Nervii._
+Tum salutato hostium duce, ad suos conversus, subditis equo
calcaribus, Germanorum ordines praetervectus est, neque expectatis
legatis, nec respondente ullo.+
_Thereupon, after saluting the enemy’s general, he turned to his
companions, and setting spurs to his horse, rode past the ranks
of the Germans, without either waiting for his staff, or receiving
an answer from anyone._
HELPS TO STYLE.
Though Style cannot perhaps be taught, it can certainly be formed and
improved. There are several ways of improving your Style. For example:--
+14. Through the Best English Literature.+--+Read good Literature+, the
best English Authors in prose and verse. You will know something,
perhaps, of Shakespeare and Scott, of Macaulay and Tennyson. Though you
may not be able to attack the complete works of any great author, you
ought not to have any difficulty in finding good books of selections
from the English Classics.
+15. Through good Translations.+--Study a few +good English Versions+ of
passages from the best Latin writers. You may often have a good version
of the passage you translate read to you in your Division after your
mistakes have been pointed out to you, and to this you should pay great
attention. You will thus learn eventually to suit your style to the
Author you are translating, while at the same time you render the
passage closely and accurately.
+16. Be Clear.+--Remember that the first characteristic of a good style
is +clearness+--that is, to say what you mean and to mean what you say.
Quintilian, the great critic, says that the aim of the translator should
be, not that the reader may understand if he will, but that he _must_
understand whether he will or not. The more you read the greatest
Authors the more you will see that, as Coleridge says, ‘there is a
reason assignable not only for every word, but for the position of every
word.’
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