(ii.) _Translation._--The form of the sentence shows that it is
_reported speech_, and not the actual words of the speaker +Centenius+,
who is still the principal subject, and +dixit+, _understood_, the
principal verb, and +se peritum ... usurum+ the object of +dixit+. You
should now be able to translate without any difficulty, and the logical
common-sense rules for the conversion of Or. Recta into Or. Obliqua
explain the mood of the verb +capti forent+ in the subordinate clause
introduced by +quibus+.
Literally: _Centenius said that he, experienced in both the enemy and
the districts, would soon make it worth (their) while: and that he would
use against their inventor those arts by which up to that time both our
leaders and our armies had been overcome._ Notice that the long relative
clause +quibus artibus ... forent+ is in Latin placed before the
antecedent +iis+.
You will readily see that this must be improved in several points.
Thus:--
(a) +Use Oratio Recta+--more graphic and better suited to our idiom.
(b) _arts_. Change this to some more suitable military term--e.g.
_tactics_.
_He was well acquainted (he said) both with the enemy and the country,
and would shortly make it worth their while, and would employ against
their originator those very tactics by which both our leaders and our
armies had up to that time been baffled._
+V.+ +Id non promissum magis stolide, quam stolide creditum: tamquam
eaedem militares et imperatoriae artes essent!+
(i.) _Vocabulary._--
+stolide+, cf. _stolid_ = dull, foolish.
(ii.) _Translation._--The finite copula +est+ is, as often, omitted; the
two principal verbs are +promissum (est)+ and +creditum (est)+ linked by
the comparative particles +magis--quam+, and the subject is +id+;
+tamquam--essent!+ is a subordinate clause modifying the two principal
verbs, and expressing contemptuous wonder.
Cf. ‘+tamquam clausa sit Asia, sic nihil perfertur ad nos+.’
You can now translate
Literally: _That was promised not more foolishly than it was foolishly
believed, just as if the arts of a soldier and of a general were the
same._
Here you can make several improvements; avoid the repetition of
_foolishly_, and use a better term than _arts_, and perhaps break up the
sentence into two short ones. Thus:--
_The folly of the promise was not greater than that of the credit it
received. Just as though the qualities of a soldier and of a general
were the same!_
+VI.+ +Data pro quinque octo milia militum; pars dimidia cives, pars
socii.+
(i.) _Vocabulary._--
+dimidia+ √+med-+, +mid-+ = _middle_, so +dimidius+ = +dis + medius+.
(ii.) _Translation._--This sentence is very simple: notice that here,
too, +sunt+ and +erant+ are omitted.
_Eight thousand soldiers were given him instead of five: half were
citizens, half allies._
+VII.+ +Et ipse aliquantum voluntariorum in itinere ex agris concivit,
ac prope duplicate exercitu, in Lucanos pervenit, ubi Hannibal,
nequiquam secutus Claudium, substiterat.+
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