(b) that +Postquam ... cecidit+ is a subordinate clause of _time_
modifying the action of the principal verb +fusa est+.
It would perhaps be well to translate at first literally:--
_After that he, not only out of regard for_ (+pro+) _his old fame, but
also from fear of future disgrace, if he should survive a disaster
brought about by his own rashness, exposing himself to the weapons of
the enemy fell, the Roman army was at once routed._
You will see that this rendering, though verbally correct, is not
English, and must be considerably altered before it can be called a good
translation. Thus:--
(a) _It is too long._ You can remedy this by taking +postquam ...
cecidit+ as one complete sentence, and +fusa ... acies+ as another.
(b) _Exposing himself._ Better _exposed himself to ... and_. Notice here
the strictly accurate use of the Pres. participle in Latin.
(c) ‘+future+’ may be omitted, as tautological[15] in English. Cf. our
inexact idiom ‘_he promised to come_’ (Lat. ‘_that he would come_’).
[Footnote 15: _i.e._ needless repetition (ταὐτὸ λέγειν = to say
the same thing).]
_At last, both for the sake of his old renown and from the fear of
disgrace should he survive a disaster brought on by his own rashness, he
threw himself among the enemy’s darts and was slain. The Roman army was
routed in a moment._ --Church and B.
+V.+ +Sed adeo ne fugae quidem iter patuit omnibus viis ab equite
insessis, ut ex tanta multitudine vix mille evaserint, ceteri passim
alii alia peste absumpti sint.+
(i.) _Vocabulary._--
+pătuit+ = _was open_. Cf. +păte-facio+ = _to make open_; +păt-ulus+ =
_open_, _spread out_; +păt-era+ = _a broad, flat dish_. English,
_patent_.
+insessis+ = _occupied_; +in + sed-eo+ = _sit upon_--so, _occupy_.
+passim+ = _hither and thither_, _far and wide_, formed from +passus+
(+pando+), _expand_.
(ii.) _Translation._--This sentence resembles in form Sentence IV., with
one principal verb +patuit+, and a principal subject +iter+, and a
subordinate clause of _result_, +ut ... absumpti sint+, modifying the
action of the principal verb +patuit+. You may conveniently break up
this sentence into two, by beginning a new sentence with +Ceteri+.
Thus:--
_So completely closed against them was every chance of escape, all the
roads being beset by cavalry, that out of so numerous a host hardly a
thousand escaped. The rest perished as they fled, some by one death and
some by another._
Before laying aside these two passages, you should pay attention to the
following points:--
(i.) _Vocabulary._--Besides carefully noticing _new_ words, try to form
groups of _cognates_ (i.e. _related words_). One of the best ways to
enlarge your vocabulary is to group together _words of common origin_,
and to add to each, where you can, derivative and cognate English words.
To take a few examples from this passage:--
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