One of the most interesting personal touches, to be found only in our
private record, was introduced at the end of the fourth chapter. It
had been a long stretch of dictation, and when the planchette stopped I
asked if there was any more. The pointer gave only this, "No--30."
Having had no experience with printing offices, I was mystified until
my husband explained that "30 on the hook" means the end of a given
piece of work.
Mark once made use of the expression, "the story contains a great deal
of brevity that will have to be untied later on." This untying process
is nowhere more aptly illustrated than in the fourth chapter of our
original copy, a brief chapter that contained the condensed material of
Wat Harlow's letter to Jap, the birth of little J.W. and Isabel
Granger's first kiss. There was nothing about Bill's boyhood, no
record of Jap's home surroundings, none of the amusing details of the
printing office wherein Jap and Bill were learning their trade. All
these incidents, which seem so essential to the story, were introduced
when the first draft of the story had been completed. The seventh
chapter, which has to do with the babyhood of little J.W., was dictated
after the revision had apparently been completed. When I asked Mark
why he inserted it, the planchette made this curious reply:
"I was thinking that we'd better soften the shock of the boy's death."
For us, through whom the story was being transmitted, there was no
softening of Ellis Hinton's death. We knew from the foregoing chapter
that the country editor had gone to the mountains for his health, and
that Flossy had no hope; but when we had recorded the words: "Jap
closed the press upon the inky type, and gathered the great bunches of
fragrant blossoms and heaped them upon the press, to be forever
silent," a great wave of sadness swept over me, I knew not why. The
action of the planchette was so rapid that I could not stop to think or
question. It was as if the man dictating the story had an unpleasant
task before him, which he wished to have done with as soon as possible.
When the final words, "At rest. FLOSSY," had been spelled out, and the
planchette stopped abruptly, Mrs. Hays cried:
"My God, what has happened!" and I looked up to see that she was very
white, and tears were slipping down her cheeks.
"Ellis is dead," my husband said, very simply. He had foreseen the
end, had grasped the infinite pathos of that old Washington press,
decked as a funeral casket with the flowers that had been sent to usher
in the new regime.
When the evening's copy had been read, I asked Mark if he wished to
comment on it.
"Not to-night, Emily," the planchette spelled. "I am all broken up. I
didn't want Ellis to die. I tried to figure a way to save him; but I
couldn't make it go."
When we met again, on the 2d of October, the dictation began with these
words:
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