Notes on Novelists, with Some Other NotesJames, Henry
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Notes on Novelists, with Some Other Notes
James, Henry
Fiction -- History and criticism; Novelists
the value of the stores, about which he can for the time make us believe
what he will? so that, to take an example susceptible of brief
statement, we wince at a certain quite peculiarly gratuitous sacrifice
to the casual in “Marriage” very much as at seeing some fine and
indispensable little part of a mechanism slip through profane fingers
and lose itself. Who does not remember what ensues after a little upon
the aviational descent of the hero of the fiction just named into the
garden occupied, in company with her parents, by the young lady with
whom he is to fall in love?—and this even though the whole opening
scene so constituted, with all the comedy hares its function appears to
be to start, remains with its back squarely turned, esthetically
speaking, to the quarter in which the picture develops. The point for
our mortification is that by one of the first steps in this development,
the first impression on him having been made, the hero accidentally
meets the heroine, of a summer eventide, in a leafy lane which supplies
them with the happiest occasion to pursue their acquaintance—or in
other words supplies the author with the liveliest consciousness (as we
at least feel it should have been) that just so the relation between the
pair, its seed already sown and the fact of that bringing about all that
is still to come, pushes aside whatever veil and steps forth into life.
To show it step forth and affirm itself as a relation, what is this but
the interesting function of the whole passage, on the performance of
which what follows is to hang?—and yet who can say that when the
ostensible sequence is presented, and our young lady, encountered again
by her stirred swain, under cover of night, in a favouring wood, is at
once encompassed by his arms and pressed to his lips and heart (for
celebration thus of their third meeting) we do not assist at a well-nigh
heartbreaking miscarriage of “effect”? We see effect, invoked in vain,
simply stand off unconcerned; effect not having been at all consulted in
advance she is not to be secured on such terms. And her presence would
so have redounded—perfectly punctual creature as she is on a made
appointment and a clear understanding—to the advantage of all
concerned. The bearing of the young man’s act is all in our having begun
to conceive it as possible, begun even to desire it, in the light of
what has preceded; therefore if the participants have _not_ been shown
us as on the way to it, nor the question of it made beautifully to
tremble for us in the air, its happiest connections fail and we but
stare at it mystified. The instance is undoubtedly trifling, but in the
infinite complex of such things resides for a work of art the shy
virtue, shy at least till wooed forth, of the whole susceptibility. The
case of Mr. Wells might take us much further—such remarks as there
would be to make, say, on such a question as the due understanding, on
the part of “The Passionate Friends” (not as associated persons but as a
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